

Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:29 PM
Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:34 PM
Oh, come on. You know my credentials well enough to know that I have no hope of creating a better scene from scratch. I can only criticize that which already is. (Yes, yes. Very convenient for me.So far, this scene has only been discussed in vague commentaries... "It needs to be better." "It's cliche." etc. and so on. Well, Judo (and others), what would you change about it? What specifically would you modify to make it work?As for the ferry scene… the problem is not that a scene tanked. The problem is that a PIVOTAL scene tanked. THIS is the moment where the Joker’s reason for unreason unravels. This is where the film is headed. It’s to be one of the great messages we’re to take from it. Much of the weight of the entire film, I think, rests upon the outcome of this moment. It’s a really bad time for an ‘oops’.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:50 PM
So far, this scene has only been discussed in vague commentaries... "It needs to be better." "It's cliche." etc. and so on. Well, Judo (and others), what would you change about it? What specifically would you modify to make it work?As for the ferry scene… the problem is not that a scene tanked. The problem is that a PIVOTAL scene tanked. THIS is the moment where the Joker’s reason for unreason unravels. This is where the film is headed. It’s to be one of the great messages we’re to take from it. Much of the weight of the entire film, I think, rests upon the outcome of this moment. It’s a really bad time for an ‘oops’.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:55 PM
Ah. Fair enough. My reaction didn't at all match yours (I was scared for the boat parties, and found the scene incredible tense and suspenseful on both viewings), but if you don't feel that, obviously the scenes fall apart.I’ll try though. Missing, first off, are compelling characters. REAL humans, with real dialogue, displaying believable emotions. Not once do I feel scared for either boat party, or even better yet, do I feel like a part of the party. I don’t find myself asking “what would I do?!”, which is what the scene needs to do to really sell itself.
Well, yes. It's a very somber moment as opposed to tons and oodles of panic. From a filmmaking perspective, I think that's a right way to go about it, rather than going all chaotic (we get so much chaos before and after it), and I don't find it unbelievable. There are real-life reports from similar crisis situations that mirror the actions of the ferry passengers.The whole moment dwells on the somber, but none of the panic. Decisions are made as if they’re part of a jury deciding on someone else’s imprisonment, and not their own lives. Or, most of the passengers look defeated and miserable as if they’ve all already accepted that they’re the ones to go.
Uh, the armed guards? Nevermind had he just grabbed it, it might cause a huge panic from the guards and inmates, causing plenty of unneeded injury. If he really was as decent a human being as the movie suggests, talking slowly to the guy as not to cause incident was the best way to go about it.If he was fully intending to pull the trigger, he would have just grabbed the detonator and done it. Who would have stopped him?
I think it is a good scene. Not perfect - the bit part actors I don't find convincing - but good. The writing is obvious, but that's no major crime, either.I cannot believe that you think the scene is perfect, or even 'good'. Sufficient at best. What are your ideas?
Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:57 PM
But I think we're supposed to fix the scene so that the Joker still 'loses', ya know?That would be bold and shocking and it would change the cliche'd morality tete-a-tete between the battling Joker and Batman.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 05:58 PM
No, I'm assuming that if a scene doesn't work for you, you know how to diagnose the problem. Now, if that isn't the case, and it "simply doesn't work for you," that's okay. But it is always more interesting when the discussion gets beyond that.Ha, you're assuming that we earn our living writing screenplays. I'm not a guy who does treatments for films. Hell, I don't even write James Bond short stories or novels as some other good folk here do.
Big tragedy, sure. But it also sends a message about humanity that would be horrifically bleak. I think Nolan wanted a shred of hope to remain. And I think he's right in that. The rest of the film is one tragic incident after another... it's nice to see something justifying some degree of faith in humanity.How's that for somewhat of a surprise? Joker lied about the detonators connected to the other ferry and only one person on the good ferry (the one who moves swiftly to the man with detonator in the scene I suggest above) is truly willing to kill. The tragedy is that he kills himself and everyone who's good.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:00 PM
But hey, not everbody can like these big phenomenon films. In fact, history has showed us that the bigger the hype around a film is, the more likely there is to be a substantial group of folks who don't think it's all that.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:04 PM
I never indicated otherwise. We all have phenomenon films we each buy into, but there's no phenomenon film that will enchant everybody. You mention PULP FICTION and TITANIC... well, I don't like either of those (find the first one desperately hollow and find the second one unbearably awful). So there ya go.Well, I sometimes like big phenomenon films and I'm sometimes prepared to buy into the hype.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:11 PM
No, I'm assuming that if a scene doesn't work for you, you know how to diagnose the problem. Now, if that isn't the case, and it "simply doesn't work for you," that's okay. But it is always more interesting when the discussion gets beyond that.Ha, you're assuming that we earn our living writing screenplays. I'm not a guy who does treatments for films. Hell, I don't even write James Bond short stories or novels as some other good folk here do.
Big tragedy, sure. But it also sends a message about humanity that would be horrifically bleak. I think Nolan wanted a shred of hope to remain. And I think he's right in that. The rest of the film is one tragic incident after another... it's nice to see something justifying some degree of faith in humanity.How's that for somewhat of a surprise? Joker lied about the detonators connected to the other ferry and only one person on the good ferry (the one who moves swiftly to the man with detonator in the scene I suggest above) is truly willing to kill. The tragedy is that he kills himself and everyone who's good.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:11 PM
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:12 PM
But the Joker will still have won. And it would still be just one more defeat in a film full of them.Yea...and that's why i say in my scenario that everyone on the good ferry (but one) changes their mind and says "don't do it"...and that the big guy on the criminal ferry still has the detonator un triggered in his hand.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:15 PM
But the Joker will still have won. And it would still be just one more defeat in a film full of them.Yea...and that's why i say in my scenario that everyone on the good ferry (but one) changes their mind and says "don't do it"...and that the big guy on the criminal ferry still has the detonator un triggered in his hand.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:19 PM
No more than those of us who love THE DARK KNIGHT are just trying to be part of the "cool" crowd that loves it. So yeah. I've got nothing against anybody who dislikes THE DARK KNIGHT, and to be honest, Loomis, I would have been somewhat suprised if you were crazy about it.Sure. I just sensed the implication that some of us were dissing THE DARK KNIGHT in order to be part of a "cool" backlash.
Quite right. The visuals are the biggest area of improvement from BEGINS to THE DARK KNIGHT, if you ask me.Some beautiful establishing shots in this film, though, I'll give it that. The Hong Kong skyline and so on.
I've heard the IMAX experience is quite incredible. I'm looking to see an IMAX viewing next week.There's still probably enough to merit a second viewing, though. Like I say, I want to see it in Imax.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:21 PM
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:23 PM
But he still wins. And doubly. Because he not only proved the nature of humanity, he got Batman to become a cold-blooded murderer (which is what the Joker had been begging for him to do during the whole film). It would be bleaker than anything already in THE DARK KNIGHT.No because in my scenario Joker is killed by Batman.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:27 PM
But he still wins. And doubly. Because he not only proved the nature of humanity, he got Batman to become a cold-blooded murderer (which is what the Joker had been begging for him to do during the whole film). It would be bleaker than anything already in THE DARK KNIGHT.No because in my scenario Joker is killed by Batman.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:32 PM
Somber? Really? Just sitting there in sulking indecision, effectively waiting for both boats to blow? And if they believe that both boats are going to blow anyway, then why not jump for it? I guess there are a lot of questions to ask in a situation such as that, and I didn’t feel like the scene took me into the moment to ask them of myself.Well, yes. It's a very somber moment as opposed to tons and oodles of panic. From a filmmaking perspective, I think that's a right way to go about it, rather than going all chaotic (we get so much chaos before and after it), and I don't find it unbelievable. There are real-life reports from similar crisis situations that mirror the actions of the ferry passengers.The whole moment dwells on the somber, but none of the panic. Decisions are made as if they’re part of a jury deciding on someone else’s imprisonment, and not their own lives. Or, most of the passengers look defeated and miserable as if they’ve all already accepted that they’re the ones to go.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:32 PM
Well, technically I didn't quote you out of context because all of your thoughts weren't there when I quoted you.No, finish my quote...you quote me out of context and while was still swiftly formulating my thoughts.But he still wins. And doubly. Because he not only proved the nature of humanity, he got Batman to become a cold-blooded murderer (which is what the Joker had been begging for him to do during the whole film). It would be bleaker than anything already in THE DARK KNIGHT.No because in my scenario Joker is killed by Batman.
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Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:37 PM
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:38 PM
Well it was there for me. In spades. So I guess that's why we feel so differently about this finale, and since that's more of a gut reaction thing than anything, I guess we'll all just have to agree to disagree, because that's an area where discussion can't really be productive.Suspense is what it’s missing, as Loomis said.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 06:48 PM
Well, it's not like I'm going to produce anything by going back to work either...Well it was there for me. In spades. So I guess that's why we feel so differently about this finale, and since that's more of a gut reaction thing than anything, I guess we'll all just have to agree to disagree, because that's an area where discussion can't really be productive.Suspense is what it’s missing, as Loomis said.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 07:46 PM
Well, technically I didn't quote you out of context because all of your thoughts weren't there when I quoted you.No, finish my quote...you quote me out of context and while was still swiftly formulating my thoughts.But he still wins. And doubly. Because he not only proved the nature of humanity, he got Batman to become a cold-blooded murderer (which is what the Joker had been begging for him to do during the whole film). It would be bleaker than anything already in THE DARK KNIGHT.No because in my scenario Joker is killed by Batman.
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But it still stands that even if the audience knows there were good people on the ferries, the Joker's symbolic act still has its power - he won his victory, as far as he's concerned. He doesn't need everyone on the ferry to be bad to claim that victory. And it still stands that the Batman's killing of the Joker isn't really a victory, it's a defeat in that it's acceding to the Joker's desires.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 07:54 PM
It's all the above, and admittedly, it would work for most people, I'm sure. It's not at all a scenario I'd prefer (I'm dead-set against the Joker dying in any fashion at all), but I see why it works more for you and it would work more for some others. Props on the creativity.Now that is cool and bold and different and shocking and dramatic...and it dots all the Is and crosses all the Ts on the audience side as well as the Joker losing all around and evil not beggeting more evil.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 08:07 PM
It's all the above, and admittedly, it would work for most people, I'm sure. It's not at all a scenario I'd prefer (I'm dead-set against the Joker dying in any fashion at all), but I see why it works more for you and it would work more for some others. Props on the creativity.Now that is cool and bold and different and shocking and dramatic...and it dots all the Is and crosses all the Ts on the audience side as well as the Joker losing all around and evil not beggeting more evil.
Posted 24 July 2008 - 08:12 PM
Well, as I've said before, I don't think they did. And even if I did think the ferries thing didn't work all that well, I think the other elements of that sequence (the hostage situation and SWAT team material and Batman's confrontation of the Joker) would more than keep it afloat for me. 'Cause I think they're absolutely excellent. And even once that's overwith, I have the crackling Dent confrontation to look forward to (and yes, I know you don't care for that sequence at all).What's their excuse for letting things sag off after a rivetting 2h 5mins ?
Posted 24 July 2008 - 08:17 PM
Posted 24 July 2008 - 08:21 PM
Does anybody have access to Oldman's final dialogue of the film? What he says to his son (or audience, rather) as Batman runs away? I missed half of it because the music and the sound effects were over emphasized and drowned him out.
"Because he's the hero Gotham deserves, but not the one it needs right now...and so we'll hunt him, because he can take it. Because he's not a hero. He's a silent guardian, a watchful protector...a dark knight."
Posted 24 July 2008 - 08:22 PM
Posted 24 July 2008 - 08:27 PM
Thanks.Does anybody have access to Oldman's final dialogue of the film? What he says to his son (or audience, rather) as Batman runs away? I missed half of it because the music and the sound effects were over emphasized and drowned him out.
"Because he's the hero Gotham deserves, but not the one it needs right now...and so we'll hunt him, because he can take it. Because he's not a hero. He's a silent guardian, a watchful protector...a dark knight."
Posted 24 July 2008 - 08:31 PM
I don't know precisely why it's written that way. My guess is that Gordon's drawing the distinction between being a true hero and being a hero in the public eye. In truth, he's a real hero - he's the noble character that Gotham should adore - but in his public role, he's not a hero at all.I don't like that "Because he's the hero..." and "Because he's not a hero..." make their way into the same paragraph. Someone please help me to find sense in that, because right now it looks like some disgruntled sound technician deliberately tampered with the dialogue to screw the film.