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[volante]

BOND IS BACK

In the FAN FIC event of the year

[chrisno1]

But a clearing of story is quite in order.

It does state that Moneypenny, M and Tolliver are in the Scottish office.

There is no "Kidnap" of Jenifer. The SAS went for the spy ARMSTRONG.
Jenifer was extracted from his clutches, and taken to the Scottish office to be briefed by M and Ben.

Im glad you picked up on the name. Wait till you see how 007 deals with her.

Ahh, I saw the Scottish office reference, but it didn't register, I actually re-read the sentence and scratched my head before dismissing it as a typo! Perhaps that's a flaw of reading FanFic at 2am. I didn't pick up on the SAS stuff at all. Looks like I need to re-read...

[Qwerty]

New addition up now.

[terminus]

An excellent installment - liked the appearance by 'Barbara Mawdsley' and the action sequence at Faslane. The twists and turns in the plot keep coming - keep it up!

[volante]

Thank you Mr. Terminus. I aim to please.

When adding the chapters to the story, I always read through to see if there are any glaring mistakes.

I must confess even I felt excited reading both the conversation with Barbara (excellent Raymond Benson refeerence by the way) and the action scene on the quay.

I feel I missed out discribing Jenifer's clothing, after she had removed the coat.

Only 007 days to go until the next thrilling instalment.

[Automan]

ok ill buy it. What was she wearing? and whos Barbara?

i thight it was really going good now

banging good story looking forward to chapter 4

[volante]

Thanks guys.

Barbara Mawdsley, was the name given by Raymond Benson to the female M
The name was used for Judi Dench in the Goldeneye screen play.

I will make reference to Jenifer's clothing in chapter 4.

It doesn't add to the story, but it is titilating.

So Bond has the girl and the information.
But who were the assasins at Faslane?
Does Jenifer believe Bond is a traitor?
Is Charles Burrows involved in the Bombshell plot?
Where are the weapons, destined for Tahiti?

all these questions may or may not be answered in Chapter 4

[volante]

Bond's new company car



Jaguar XFR

[terminus]

Nice car

[volante]

:::BOMBSHELL
::::::::::::CHAPTER FOUR
::::::::::::::::::::::::MEN OF WAR[/size]

The latest chapter of the adventure Saturday 19th

[volante]

Chapter 4
:::::::::Men of War

Teaser

Bond was pleased that her name (unlike so many other Scandinavian names) was plain and easy to spell. He chuckled silently to himself as he recalled the translation of her name was “fairytale”.
He entered her name, and was rewarded with her job profile and works telephone extension; as he was about to enter the details onto his own mobile, his heart missed a beat.

Her photograph had suddenly filled the screen.
Bond looked at her image
“Well your name may be plain, but…” He said to himself as her face looked back at him from the tiny screen. It was one of the most naturally beautiful faces Bond had ever seen.
Suddenly the mission was getting interesting.

[volante]

The mission is getting interesting

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[volante]

Did amyone see Spooks last night?

I got a real eerie feeling when Lucas retrived the "Memory stick"
Also the rutless way MI5 used a civilian was very similar to the plat line here in BOMBSHELL.

Also a mention of Beslan; took me straight back to "TO KILL AND DIE FOR"

Still other than that, brilliant story line. So, my Fan Fic friends, keep a sharp look out that your story line doesn't end up on the telly.

...and for all you Megan Fox fans...roll on Saturday

[volante]

Chapter 4
Men of War

in for submission

[Qwerty]

New addition up now.

[terminus]

The latest installment of Bombshell, the perfect reading material to consume in the middle of a snowstorm. So, the Russians are behind the attempted abduction of Jennifer and they're in cahoots with, presumably, Tolliver - and we've got someone who'll proove to be, I expect, a rather interesting 'henchman' in The Major.

And now we've got bio-terrorism thrown into the mix. Bombshell just prooves to get better with each chapter, the twists and turns that are thrown at us.

[volante]

Thanks for the support guys.

The weather in the UK right now does mirror that of the Russian scene.

Your way off with Tolliver. He and M are now (as described distraught at the loss of the information)

and again Nobody is trying to kidnap Jenifer. Granted it was Russian agents that attepted to steal the memory stick. But they only want it to stop MI6 getting to the plane.
I'm sorry to disappoint but the Russians would like to see Jenifer dead.

But now for Chapter 5

Can anyone agree or disagree that Megan Fox is a good Mila?
I personally think Naomi Watts would be perfect for the vulnerable little Scots lass.

[volante]

BOMBSHELL

Chapter 5

The Fairytale of Helsinki

Submitted for posting.

Make sure you've finished eating before reading Chapter 5

Bond is tortured - Its not very pleasant.
You have been warned.
Merry Christmas

Edited by volante, 25 December 2009 - 09:23 PM.

[volante]

Mila Satu finally meets James Bond in Chapter 5 of BOMBSHELL
The Fairytale of Helsinki

Edited by volante, 25 December 2009 - 09:23 PM.

[volante]

The Verifin Institute Helsinki - Insperation for the Hildebrand Institute



Where animals aren't the only thing to go under the knife.

THE ODDS JUST CHANGED

Edited by volante, 26 December 2009 - 07:20 PM.

[volante]

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[terminus]

Can't wait to see Chapter 5 to role round. If I were buttered on that side, then I'm sure that Megan Fox would float my boat, to mix metaphors.

[volante]

As Major Tomas Sharapov's charicter develops, I would be interested if anyone thinks of him as a different entity



But don't forget the REAL villian is introduced in Chapter FIVE

The Fairytale of Helsinki

[Qwerty]

Latest addition up now. Apologies for the delay.

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[terminus]

Interesting scene. Incredibly creepy 'torture' scene.

[Automan]

Interesting scene. Incredibly creepy 'torture' scene.

Yeah yeah top marks my friend, creepy indeed. That took the scene in Thunderball and made it 1000 times better

I loved the Bond remark about tickling.
Thats pure Bond

[volante]

A non logo'd non Daniel Craig Bond teaser poster

[volante]

Thanks for the Chapter 5 vote of confidence.

I know he has only just been introduced, but does anyone have a preference for who would "play" Sharvin?

Glad you enjoyed the torture scene. A cut above the rest I think

[volante]

one of my candidates for Sharvin

Richard Roxburgh

Edited by volante, 30 December 2009 - 07:14 PM.

[volante]

another possible Sharvin

Liev Schreiber