Agree with many of these. Sat through the whole movie thinking of what I would've done differently. Little clarifiers & changes would've made a lot of difference. These points are basically in the order they occurred / were dealt with in the film, not in any sort of priority order:
1) Why does Bond remove Sciarra's ring? How does he know to perform such a seemingly random act in pursuit of information? Two possible fixes, the 1st simple, the 2nd complex:
Fix 1: two quick close-up shots of the SPECTRE ring on both Sciarra's & the helicopter pilot's fingers, indicating Bond's point of view and him making a connection that the rings are a significant symbol of this organization
Fix 2: instead of Sciarra falling from the helicopter at a random point in the fight, have him begin to fall from the helicopter but saved by his ring catching on something (a door latch, hinge, exposed metal edge, etc.), at which point, Bond catches his breath and casually removes the ring (probably with a pithy remark), thereby dispatching him
2) Why does M tape a video for Bond? Why must his mission be secret and off the books? This could be solved with the addition of a line such as: "Some ugly noises are coming from upstairs, and if certain people have their way, then even our own walls will soon have ears." This would imply the coming of Nine Eyes, which would've been in a developmental stage while the old M was still alive, and M advising Bond to keep it secret in order to keep Nine Eyes at bay.
3) If you're going to go for the Oberhauser/Blofeld/foster brother angle, OK, but do it so it feels lived in. When Moneypenny drops off Bond's personal effects from SF, perhaps she should drop some hint that she went through them, inquiring after the picture of the boy James and the other figures. This would lead Bond to relay an anecdote about going to live with Oberhauser after losing his parents, and a torturous ordeal he endured as a boy at the hands of Oberhauser's son, and set him up as a bad seed (perhaps Bond caught Franz torturing rats in the basement, and before he could tell him father, Franz locked young James in a trunk in the corner, where he remained for over 24 hours until Hannes found him & whipped the tar out of Franz.)
4) Surprisingly low body count on the bad guys' side. All the murders take place off screen or in previous films. It would've meant adding to the budget & shooting schedule, but seeing the attacks on the news doesn't have the same effect in a movie as it does in real life. We need to at least see the South Africa attack. It would've been even better, IMO, if the two delegates who voted against Nine Eyes were shown to lose their lives in the attack. Here's how I see the scene: the two delegates are discussing their decision in their office. A pretty secretary enters and leaves behind some files. One of the delegates rethinks his decision aloud to the other. In the outer office, the place bustles with people going about their daily work routine. The pretty secretary opens her desk drawer and recoils in horror at the sight of a bomb. The place goes up in flames an instant later.
5) Hinx was big & indestructible but had not much character going on. A sinister quirk would've at least made him more interesting. At the very least, more facial expressions / reactions / silent comedy from Hinx (like Bond punching Hinx & Hinx giving him a dubious look, as if to say, "really, that's the best you've got?", before landing a heavy blow).
6) How did M know about Sciarra's link with SPECTRE, or any of it? I liked the idea posed by another poster that Lucia had leaked information. During their conversation, perhaps Lucia could divulge having prevented one of her husband's terrorist attacks -- perhaps he was going to blow up a plane that, coincidentally, Lucia's sister was scheduled to be on.
7) The link between Quantum & SPECTRE still confuses me, perhaps because the word Quantum is never uttered in the movie. IMO, Mr. White seemed to imply that Blofeld's total lack of scruples or limits was the breaking point that caused factions within the group, with the stronger faction swallowing the weaker. A couple of lines would answer this:
(After hearing White's objections):
"What's the link between Quantum and this... octopus-fanciers club?"
"I just told you. Some of us had limits, wouldn't go along with the direction he wanted. Those who did were rewarded with the ring."
"And those who didn't?"
"... I'm the last one left alive."
8) Silva being a SPECTRE agent was reaching. It makes SF make less sense (I had watched it earlier in the day before seeing SP that evening). It would make more sense to say:
"Silva wasn't technically one of our. We liaised with him occasionally. When he came to us with the plan to assassinate your beloved M... and you, in the process... his interests and our aligned. We supplied him with men and arms, and sincerely wished him good luck."
9) Oberhauser taking his mother's name was weak IMO. I much preferred my own speculation, whereby the infant Ernst Stavro Blofeld was adopted by the childless Oberhausers:
"We're both orphans, James, but whereas you had the luxury of being aware of that fact --"
"Luxury? Make me an offer. You can have my luxury."
"-- I was raised without knowledge of my real identity... until you came along. It was during one of our many arguments, which increased when you came along. It was after our last little... incident. Do you still remember what I did to you, James? Well, anyway, in the middle of screaming at each other, Oberhauser blurted out that I was adopted, and his greatest failure. You were his second chance as a father."
Continue with him killing his (now found to be adoptive) father, and learning the truth of his lineage, including his birth name.
10) Eliminate the fractured London finale & have it instead be about destroying Blofeld's base of operations. In London, in intercut scenes, M & company could detain C, while Bond searches for a way to destroy the crater base, thus hindering the Nine Eyes nerve center. Perhaps Q could even use the camera within MI6 as a way of getting a coded message to Bond once he realizes that Bond is inside Nine Eyes HQ. Blowing the base is classic Bond but it's tossed away so quickly & cursorily in the movie; it could've been a grand climax.
Thoughts?
Dave
Edited by rubixcub, 19 December 2015 - 08:57 PM.