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[james bond daniel craig]

i think it will be good

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[Greene Planet]

i think it will be good

Ok, any more updates on when it will be posted Jim?

[Jim]

Due to an unforeseen, if ultimately forseeable, set of circumstances, I have decided to continue Just Another Kill on the normal fan fiction pages. It also gives me the opportunity to redux bits of it. Appearing soon, in order, up to and including ch.11, which is new.

[Jim]

Chapter 1: http://debrief.comma...p...c=55918&hl=

Chapter 2: http://debrief.comma...p;#entry1055464

[Jim]

Chapter 3: http://debrief.comma...p;#entry1057090

[Jim]

Chapter 4: http://debrief.comma...showtopic=56111

[Jim]

Chapter 5: http://debrief.comma...p;#entry1058583

[volante]

Excellent work Jim, just excellent.

Thanks for sharing

[Jim]

Thanks!

Chapter 6: http://debrief.comma...showtopic=56131

[Jim]

Chapter 7: http://debrief.comma...showtopic=56168

[Jim]

Chapter 8: http://debrief.comma...hp?showforum=93

[Jim]

Chapter 9: http://debrief.comma...showtopic=56176

[Jim]

Chapter 10: http://debrief.comma...showtopic=56177

[Jim]

Chapter 11 is now online.

Chapter 11: http://debrief.comma...p;#entry1059473

The final three chapters are coming very soon.

[Double-0-7]

It was great to re-familiarize myself with this novel - it has been quite some time since I last read it.

Chapter 11 builds nicely on its predecessors, reminds me why I don't like needles as well.

I eagerly look forward to chapter 12. I feel the story must be nearing the climax, but there are many pieces that will need to be addressed before the end.

Nice writing Jim.

[Harry Fawkes]

Spoiler

What the hell is that bloody noise?
Someone pulling at…? Picking. No, plucking. Wet plucking.
Can’t be that damned harp.
Sounds...
Pulling something heavy out of mud.


Fajeur licked the needle gleefully, ostentatiously, theatrically, drawing back and forth, the steaming dog’s tongue baconrinded thick with gobbets of foaming loose saliva. Drying the syringe along the length of his stained sash, he looked down at Bond and smiled a rabid sneer. “It is time to relax now. Time to sleep, hien?”

Now that is what I call real writing!

Nuf' said.

[Double-0-7]

It certainly paints a vivid image - a gross one at that!

[Jim]

Chapters 12 and 13 are up:

Chapter 12: http://debrief.comma...showtopic=56431


Chapter 13: http://debrief.comma...p;#entry1065318


The final chapter will be coming shortly.

[Double-0-7]

Excellent, thanks Jim!

[Double-0-7]

Chapter 12 built suspense nicely - on both story lines. I thought Chapter 13 was a little on the short side.

[Jim]

Chapter 12 built suspense nicely - on both story lines. I thought Chapter 13 was a little on the short side.

Thanks, and yes, well... hee hee hee.

The concluding chapter I hope to put up by the end of today.

[Loomis]

I know I've asked this before, but is there really no chance that we could buy hard copies (printed and bound in, like, book form) from CBn, with all necessary disclaimers splashed across the pages and all proceeds going to IFP's favourite charity?

I mean, I know the answer so don't even bother to type it, but it's just frustrating being unable to hold the best Bond novel since COLONEL SUN in my hot, sweaty hands.

[Jim]

The final chapter is up.

http://debrief.comma...showtopic=56461

I hope that you enjoy it. Thank you for your feedback so far, everyone.

[Double-0-7]

Thanks Jim, I have my Monday evening reading now!

[Double-0-7]

Couldn't wait until Monday evening and took an hour or so to finish this fine novel. I can say it was time well-spent.

The timeline and location had changed so much I had to go back to chapters 12 and 13 to make sure they hadn't been edited. Once I figured out I was right where the author wanted me, I was able to settle back into the story. Where I found the surprise that required the telling of the story to change in this way.

Quite a few twists were revealed, and a fitting end to the tale was told.

Excellent work, Jim. These 14 chapters represent many hours of effort and thought, and I appreciate it.

[Jim]

Many thanks for that, glad you derived some enjoyment from it!

[George88]

I have lurked around this and other boards but have joined today simply to say that this is a brilliant story. Thanks and well done. Have you written anything else?

[Jim]

I have lurked around this and other boards but have joined today simply to say that this is a brilliant story. Thanks and well done. Have you written anything else?

Many thanks, appreciated.

And yes I have; but not under this name. More than you might imagine.

[George88]

How interesting. Hmm. Send me a message - I won't tell, honest.

I am surprised no-one else is commenting on this piece. I will write a full review when I get time but surely I can't be the only one of a handful to have finished it?

[volante]

You're not the only one. Definitely not.

But we're all still in awe.