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#31 007jamesbond

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Posted 07 January 2012 - 07:10 PM

I cant wait to read it when it is finally posted on the fan fiction section which is currently not uploaded yet

#32 George88

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Posted 07 January 2012 - 07:18 PM

One suspects that the blessed Jim is looking at it and scowling at the punctuation.


#33 007jamesbond

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Posted 08 January 2012 - 09:40 PM

another good chapter........when the next chp coming...... ?

#34 Harry Fawkes

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Posted 09 January 2012 - 08:24 PM

Now this is what I call writing!!!!!!!!



James Bond was dead.
Within MI6 all those that had known him had mourned and accepted that fact; all that was except for M.
It was a cold night in London when M met with James Bond in the crypt of St Andrew’s church in Holborn. The rain had drained the life from the city, flushing it down the drains. M’s mood was somber, for a man who held the moral of truth close to his heart, the deception of Bond’s death had come at a price. Their conversation was brief and to the point.
M began “Are you ready to be re born?” the words gently echoed.
Bond shook his head “Not yet”
M looked on expectedly “But you gave the list to the Americans?”
Bond gave a faint nod of his head as a reply.
M continued “Then I’m sure the CIA will…” M stopped mid-sentence, he sensed there was something else.
“…All of it?” he inclined his head, inviting an answer.
“I removed one entry. One name"
“Why?” asked M
“It alluded to certain evidence which could prove to be very embarrassing to the Government, if it ever came to light. It mentions one name that I believe should meet with a career limiting experience before I come back from the dead. Don’t worry I’ll make it look like …”
M held up his hand “Who is it?”
Bond smiled, he moved effortlessly around the room, like a boxer looking for an opening
“You really don’t want to know”
“You’re probably right” they stood in silence; the low level lighting now put Bond’s face in shadow. M was about to continue but thought better of it.
“I’ll get started then” said Bond.


#35 007jamesbond

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Posted 13 January 2012 - 08:12 PM

any updates on when the next chapter is coming out?

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 10:23 AM

Now this is what I call writing!!!!!!!!



James Bond was dead.
Within MI6 all those that had known him had mourned and accepted that fact; all that was except for M.
It was a cold night in London when M met with James Bond in the crypt of St Andrew’s church in Holborn. The rain had drained the life from the city, flushing it down the drains. M’s mood was somber, for a man who held the moral of truth close to his heart, the deception of Bond’s death had come at a price. Their conversation was brief and to the point.
M began “Are you ready to be re born?” the words gently echoed.
Bond shook his head “Not yet”
M looked on expectedly “But you gave the list to the Americans?”
Bond gave a faint nod of his head as a reply.
M continued “Then I’m sure the CIA will…” M stopped mid-sentence, he sensed there was something else.
“…All of it?” he inclined his head, inviting an answer.
“I removed one entry. One name"
“Why?” asked M
“It alluded to certain evidence which could prove to be very embarrassing to the Government, if it ever came to light. It mentions one name that I believe should meet with a career limiting experience before I come back from the dead. Don’t worry I’ll make it look like …”
M held up his hand “Who is it?”
Bond smiled, he moved effortlessly around the room, like a boxer looking for an opening
“You really don’t want to know”
“You’re probably right” they stood in silence; the low level lighting now put Bond’s face in shadow. M was about to continue but thought better of it.
“I’ll get started then” said Bond.


Thank-you Harry; hope you are all enjoying the latest effort.

Next chapter will be on line this weekend.

#37 007jamesbond

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 06:42 PM

cant wait for it.......so excited

#38 volante

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 08:21 PM

cant wait for it.......so excited


Thanks for your support.

You may also like to know that in collaberation with Paul Cusack Studios, I am putting together a screen play to have a film made from certain chapters from by novels.
The film will be called RISQUE.

More details as it happens:)

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Posted 20 January 2012 - 02:20 PM

Now submitted
Chapter Four
GLOBAL WITNESS

“For 17 years, Global Witness has run pioneering campaigns against natural resource-related conflict and corruption and associated environmental and human rights abuses. From Cambodia to Congo, Sierra Leone to Angola, we have exposed the brutality and injustice that results from the fight to access and control natural resource wealth, and have sought to bring the perpetrators of this corruption and conflict to book”

#40 007jamesbond

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Posted 20 January 2012 - 06:37 PM

I cant wait to read it whenever it is finally posted

#41 volante

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Posted 23 January 2012 - 04:34 PM

I posted Chapter 4 again, soomething must have gone wrong.
Sorry for the delay guys

#42 Harry Potter

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Posted 25 January 2012 - 09:00 AM

is it just me but I cant read some of the chapters. My screen is black and I have to highlight the text in order to see it!

#43 007jamesbond

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Posted 25 January 2012 - 11:05 PM

@ Harry Potter you need to change the them to IP Boards because it lighter

Anyways when will chapter 5 be up!

#44 volante

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 04:59 PM

Chapter 5 in for submission.

M gets the backing of the F.S to look into the affairs of Jurgen Hessel.
Bond arrives in Geneva.

#45 Major Tallon

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Posted 31 January 2012 - 12:20 PM

Looking forward to it!

#46 007jamesbond

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 08:12 AM

excited for another chapter! when it posted

Edited by 007jamesbond, 02 February 2012 - 08:13 AM.


#47 Automan

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 11:50 AM

Brill long time coming but now I believe Bond is back. Good job

#48 007jamesbond

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Posted 03 February 2012 - 06:03 PM

another great chapter! I hope that more is coming soon

#49 volante

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Posted 12 February 2012 - 03:52 PM

Chapter 6 is now in for submission; so get ready the mission is just begining...


James Bond keyed in the code on the electronic lock pad and entered the small unit.
The neon tubes blinked excitedly as they threw their bright light upon the object in the centre of the spotlessly clean garage.
The metallic silver grey Jaguar C-X16 sat in anticipation of being driven.
Bond approached the car as one would a wild animal, slowly but confidently.
He walked the length of the vehicle, letting his fingers trace the sensual lines of the roof. He caressed the door handle for one moment before savagely opening the door.

The interior was just as evocative; red leather assaulted his eyes and nose in the way only a new car can.
Sliding into the cockpit, his dark suit rubbed over the leather ending in a satisfying sigh as the firm sport seat wrapped itself around him. Bond gave in to a child-like smile as he pressed the start button....


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Posted 18 February 2012 - 07:19 AM

another good chapter hope the next chapter come soon

#51 volante

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Posted 18 February 2012 - 12:26 PM

Chapter 7 is in for submission. As far as ‘super models’ go Elodie Douro was talented in the extreme. Her beautiful face seemed to radiate happiness. She was fresh and wholesome. Her hazel eyes had a quality of trust and love which humbled the most cynical of photographers, and a body that made the ‘airbrush’ artists redundant. Lenny Baker watched her from behind his Ray-Ban sunglasses. She was perfect. Skin, hair, eyes, body; just perfect. He knew instinctively that her ability to sell whatever she endorsed would take his magazine back to the top. With growing anticipation he looked forward to the next couple of days, which he hoped he would be able to look back on in years to come and say ‘Those were the days that changed history ” How right he was. Posted Image

#52 007jamesbond

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Posted 22 February 2012 - 08:49 AM

taking a bit longer to be posted but I be patience and wait

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Posted 22 February 2012 - 01:49 PM

taking a bit longer to be posted but I be patience and wait


I know, it went in for submission on Saturday 18th - 'you just can't get the staff' lol
Problem is, I'm now ready to submit chapter 8, but cannot until 7 is released

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Posted 22 February 2012 - 05:51 PM

Chapter 8
In for submission today

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Adrian Alanby - Is this how you see him?


A little CHAPTER 8 teaser...
“The name’s Bond…”
Their car smashed through the bushes and slid down the ravine. Branches cracked, and roots were unearthed as the car poured down the mountainside. The road loomed up at them, and then the car took off.
With an earth shattering crunch the car hit the road. The suspension rocketed through the body. The airbags deployed, they were thrown around like rag dolls.
An unearthly silence engulfed them.
Then came the roar of the debris from above. All around them rocks and earth cascaded upon the car.
Calmly Bond depressed the starter and drove away. The girl looked at him in utter disbelief.
Bond returned the look and smiled and continued his greeting...
“…James Bond”


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Posted 22 February 2012 - 08:08 PM

Chapter 8 on line now.

Bond and Bond girl finally meet :)

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"Juliet Guggler; now there's a name to conjure with" Said Bond

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Posted 24 February 2012 - 07:51 AM

Cracking read both chapters polished off in double quick tme. really lovin it

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Posted 28 February 2012 - 06:14 PM

Chapter 9

JIGSAW

In for submission...





There is no grey between love and hate


Like the million shades between black and white


No Crimson dawn or sweet sunset


No rainbows end?


A shattered life and a twist of fate


Like a million words that haunt the night


A living nightmare I can’t forget


Fairy-tale end?


Fate will guide my hand


Friends will understand


That I have always…


…Loved you


I saw the beauty in you. You saw the good in me


With a love so bright even the Blind could see


No tender touch can dry these tear filled eyes.


No happy end?


See the tree how big it’s grown


Think of me you’re not alone


Happy tears fall to the ground


Grow the love that we have found


Happy tears soak in the earth


You have my all for what it’s worth


Happy tears in your eyes


Love goes on when the body dies



#58 007jamesbond

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Posted 02 March 2012 - 10:16 PM

Can't wait to read it when it is posted

#59 volante

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Posted 03 March 2012 - 01:07 PM

Can't wait to read it when it is posted


Guys, I'm as frustrated as you. The chapter was submitted Tuesday evening.
The moment it's released I will submit Chapter 10

#60 Jim

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Posted 03 March 2012 - 01:43 PM

Well it's posted now. I am sure member Harry Potter could have had a preview though.