
I thought that it was an especially nice touch to have the villain actually present at Bond's initial briefing with M. That would be something that would be very interesting to see on screen.
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Excellent choice, tdalton. I do like the extrapolation idea of Goodnight as RN (or possibly Australian Navy).
Blast, tdalton, you stole my Bond Girl 1 idea! I guess I'll just have to use her for Bond Girl 2, instead.
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Now THERE'S an interesting casting - certainly in keeping with the casting of the Craig Era on film so far. I did have to look up what the heck chessboxing was. I'm not sure if it's a practical joke on the world or if this sport really exists after checking up on it!
http://en.wikipedia....iki/Chessboxing
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Yup - it would certainly provide an interesting scene. A nice boxing scene for Craig would certainly please those who enjoyed the swimming trunk scene in Casino Royale. At least, I know it would make me very happy
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Okay, If I'm going to write (parts of) this up, I've got a few little requests.
First of all, can you please be specific in what you post? So far, all I know is that the villain is German and likes chess-boxing. That's not very much to go on.
Posted 19 July 2010 - 10:21 PM
Also, I feel the plot is a little unrealistic. Looking at tectonic plate boundaries, there are no fault line running between China and Taiwan, so I doubt a land-bridge could be easily established. I also feel the invasion plot is a little too "Evil Empire". It feels like a pastiche of 1980s action films, where the villains were communists and therefore stupid. If ever China invaded Taiwan, they'd be slapped down almost immediately. If it were me, I'd have Krause compromising the continental shelf off the coast of Taiwan and then attempting a tectonic plate shift between the Filipino and Pacific plates. The resulting earthquake combined with the compromised continental shelf would casue massive devastation as parts of Taiwan - mostly the populated parts - fell into the ocean. In the aftermath, China would race forward with diplomatic, financial and humanitarian aid, binding Taiwan to itself as a de facto state. If Taiwan were to depend on Beijing for its survival, the world would be less likely to react once Chinese troops occupied the island under the pretense of upholding the peace. And when those Chinese troops never left, there would be little the world would be able to do since China would have effectively controlled Taiwan for a year.
But that's just me. If you still want the land-bridge part of the plot, we can do that - but I think dinovelvet would be better off writing those parts, since I think any story I couldn't fully get behind would suffer.
Posted 19 July 2010 - 10:36 PM
Unfortunately - what has been put down as the plot by the person who submitted the plot (in this situation, me) is what needs to be used in the end product. For example, I worked with the plot about computational fluid dynamics even thought I may not have enjoyed it - and there may have been castings or locations I would not have made, but I have run with them because that's the nature of the project.
That said, the plot kernel I posted doesn't preclude the tectonic plates in question being the Filipino and Pacific Plates.
Posted 19 July 2010 - 11:34 PM
And with the "stunt" ideas, should we alter it to "action scene or stunt"? It seems to me that not every action scene needs to have a Big Stunt. For example in CR "Bond tries to save Vesper from gunmen in a sinking palazzo in Venice" doesn't have a particular stunt but it's a fun action scene. Obviously people should write something a bit more detailed than, say, "car chase" or "insert fight with henchman here" but it gives the option of being able to do action without having to shoehorn a death-defying leap in there somewhere
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I understand that, but I can't write something that I know to be impossible. There is simply no way to shift plate tectonics to cause a land-bridge between China and Taiwan to appear. Try as I might, I cannot think of a single scenario where it would be remotely possible. In order for a land bridge to appear, you would need a fault line either side of Taiwan: one on the eastern side to shift westward, and one on the western side to rise up and form the land-bridge. However, there is no fault line running between Taiwan and mainland China, so where the hell is the land-bridge going to come from. I know, you could always write the story so that, for the purposes of the plot, there is a fault line running between China and Taiwan. But maybe it's arrogance on my part, but I simply cannot physically write anything that I know a simple Google search would contradict. It might only be a game on a fan forum, but I take pride in my work. If you can think up a convincing way to cause a land-bridge to exist, then I'm fine. I just like to keep everything in such a way that audiences have to suspend their disbelief as little as possible.Unfortunately - what has been put down as the plot by the person who submitted the plot (in this situation, me) is what needs to be used in the end product. For example, I worked with the plot about computational fluid dynamics even thought I may not have enjoyed it - and there may have been castings or locations I would not have made, but I have run with them because that's the nature of the project.
That said, the plot kernel I posted doesn't preclude the tectonic plates in question being the Filipino and Pacific Plates.
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