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[Qwerty]

To Die Alone

Discuss Greene Planet's 'To Die Alone' here.

[Greene Planet]

Thanks Qwerty!

[Quantum is Forever]

L O V E IT!

BTW how big is your signiture, and how do I add my own? It's been so long since I've been on CB.n.

[Qwerty]

L O V E IT!

BTW how big is your signiture, and how do I add my own? It's been so long since I've been on CB.n.

Graphic signature submission guidelines and rules here.

[Greene Planet]

Qwerty, how did you make yours?

[Qwerty]

New addition up now.

[Qwerty]

New addition up now.

[Harry Fawkes]

Reads like an exciting piece of work should read. The pace is fast and the writing is full of zest. You don't waist time on bull... but get straight to the point which I like most. As for the characters they are aptly formed and one can relate to them. Your knowledge of the nicks and nacks surrounding the plot means you have done alot of research. I will of course go more in dettail when the story is finnished. In the meantime, I am waiting for the next instalment as I will be taking it with me on a small trip. If you don't hear from me for a while its cause I'm out and about in the heat

As for my novel....well I gotta put it on hold for a while. I'm gonna try and write in my spare time but I think it is going to be a bit dificult. We'll see.

Keep it up Green Planet.

(PS CTU is great)

[Greene Planet]

Thanks for the praise, Harry. And yes, I have done a alot of research, been watchen 24 alot lately. BTW, the next installment will be titled: The Killers. and will be up by next week.

[Qwerty]

New addition up now.

[Greene Planet]

I am proud the annouce, that To Die Alone, is completed.

[Harry Fawkes]

And I am proud to have read it.
Good job.
I really enjoyed it.
It is, as I have said before, quite sharp and straight to the point.
TO DIE ALONE started fast and kept up the pace throughout building up a tension till the final climax. I believe it is a highly enjoyable story, one full of great characters and plenty of action and stands up with some of the really good stuff here.

Please keep on writing Greene Planet and try and expand on THE KILLERS. Wouldn't mind at all to see what the man called Morgan Cheynein gets up to in this one.

Again well done

Harry Fawkes

[Greene Planet]

And I am proud to have read it.
Good job.
I really enjoyed it.
It is, as I have said before, quite sharp and straight to the point.
TO DIE ALONE started fast and kept up the pace throughout building up a tension till the final climax. I believe it is a highly enjoyable story, one full of great characters and plenty of action and stands up with some of the really good stuff here.

Please keep on writing Greene Planet and try and expand on THE KILLERS. Wouldn't mind at all to see what the man called Morgan Cheynein gets up to in this one.

Again well done

Harry Fawkes

Thanks for the praise, means alot coming from you! And yes, I plan to make The Killers much longer now that I've gotten TDA down.