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The Siamese Organisaton - Discussion
Started by
Qwerty
, Nov 04 2007 11:15 PM
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Qwerty
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Posted 04 November 2007 - 11:15 PM
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Jim
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Posted 05 November 2007 - 07:53 AM
It appears to be the same as the other one which itself was the same as the other other one.
I know that Bond tales have the reputation that there's basically only one story but this appears to be taking it to extremes.
I know that Bond tales have the reputation that there's basically only one story but this appears to be taking it to extremes.
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Hopkins 009
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Posted 05 November 2007 - 11:10 PM
CHAPTER 5 IS NOW UP
It is very different. It is longer and a new organisation exists. The grammar is better and there are no spelling errors.
It is very different. It is longer and a new organisation exists. The grammar is better and there are no spelling errors.
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Jim
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Posted 06 November 2007 - 06:17 PM
CHAPTER 5 IS NOW UP
It is very different. It is longer and a new organisation exists. The grammar is better and there are no spelling errors.
Hmm. I am afraid that I disagree.
However, you are most persistent with it so that must count for something.
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Posted 07 November 2007 - 10:31 PM
FINISHED with Part 1 of The Siamese Oranisation.
30 Pages. Read it and give me your thought or suggestions.
30 Pages. Read it and give me your thought or suggestions.