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Land Of The Free - Discussion

Started by Qwerty , Oct 11 2007 11:18 PM

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#1 Qwerty

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Posted 11 October 2007 - 11:18 PM

Discuss Hopkins 009's 'Land of the Free' here.

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#2 Jim

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Posted 12 October 2007 - 07:12 AM

Discuss Hopkins 009's 'Land of the Free' here.

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It appears to be the same as the other one, the liberty thing.

#3 Hopkins 009

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Posted 12 October 2007 - 07:04 PM

It is similar to Within the Land of Liberty but better grammar and longer story. Also, if your confused if its a story or script, the answer is script. The other information is just detailing the characters and what is going on you need that in a Screenplay. Hint** Bond is not dead if you read to the end of chapter 3.

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Posted 13 October 2007 - 07:15 AM

It is similar to Within the Land of Liberty but better grammar and longer story. Also, if your confused if its a story or script, the answer is script. The other information is just detailing the characters and what is going on you need that in a Screenplay. Hint** Bond is not dead if you read to the end of chapter 3.


That makes it very much clearer.

Better grammar, you say?

I wouldn't give away your cliffhangers like that. And what if I nearly die reading it?

#5 Hopkins 009

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Posted 16 October 2007 - 10:07 PM

Beginning of Chapter 4 is now up.

#6 Hopkins 009

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Posted 16 October 2007 - 10:53 PM

Chapter 4 Now up. My story is 4605 words now. Which is equilviant to 23 pages.

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Posted 17 October 2007 - 04:57 PM

Chapter 4 Now up. My story is 4605 words now. Which is equilviant to 23 pages.


Never mind the quality, feel the width eh?

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Posted 30 October 2007 - 12:00 AM

CH. 4 IS NOW UP


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