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[Hopkins 009]

Bond:
34 years old
00 status for 2 years
Does not bring up the events of what happened to LeChifre's organisation
Wise
6ft. 1 Short Blonde Hair Blue Eyes
Makes smarter decisions then he did in Casino Royale
Stays away from poker if he can
Has nightmares about Vesper

Locations:
Napoli
New York
Tokyo
Ukraine
London (Mi6)

[Garth007]

Bond:
34 years old
00 status for 2 years
Does not bring up the events of what happened to LeChifre's organisation
Wise
6ft. 1 Short Blonde Hair Blue Eyes
Makes smarter decisions then he did in Casino Royale
Stays away from poker if he can
Has nightmares about Vesper

Locations:
Napoli
New York
Tokyo
Ukraine
London (Mi6)

what is the main story about, It makes people understand more about the story so they can have a better name for it.

[Jim]

A Fresh Hell.

[MkB]

If I may elaborate on Jim's idea : "A Fresher Hell".

Or, using an italian proverb (in relation with the italian location) :
"Let the dead bury the dead"
The italian proverb is : "Chi muore giace - chi vive, si da pace" ("the dead lies - the livings are comforted"), which "officially" corresponds to "Let the dead bury the dead" in english, but I like it better in its original, litteral meaning.

[MkB]

In the same "proverbial" vein, this time from Ukraine / Russia:

"There is no evil without good" (litterally)
("Каждая ситуация имеет две стороны" or "Нету худа без добра")
(english proverb = "Every cloud has a silver lining")

or

"The devil is not as scary as they paint (or draw) him."
(Не так стра́шен чёрт, как его́ малю́ют.)
(english proverb = "The devil is not so black as he is painted")
The last is more Ukrainian.

Edited by MkB, 16 September 2007 - 01:47 PM.

[Hitch]

A Fresh Hell.

Jim, you tinker.

[Hopkins 009]

Good responses so far, my story will have a big part in New York I decided
so far the best response is "Let the dead bury the dead"

[Nilles]

Chris, i actually have no suggestions for your story, =/ i know you asked me to come on and suggest a few, but talk to me in school tomorrow, i might have one for you if you describe your main plot-line a bit more in depth.


-Nilles

[Hopkins 009]

In this First Installment of my James Bond series Bond will take on an adventure that will take him to Napoli, Tokyo, Ukraine, and the final action in New York. Along the way he will face off with some deadly assassins along with beutiful women. Bond doesnt trust anyone but he will learn that he cant do it alone. Bond will also learn of a organisation that is thought to be dismissed will arive once again. If Bond is going to succeed against his enemies he will first have to battle the demons with in himself.

[Hopkins 009]

In this First Installment of my James Bond series Bond will take on an adventure that will take him to Napoli, Tokyo, Ukraine, and the final action in New York. Along the way he will face off with some deadly assassins along with beutiful women. Bond doesnt trust anyone but he will learn that he cant do it alone. Bond will also learn of a organisation that is thought to be dismissed will arive once again. If Bond is going to succeed against his enemies he will first have to battle the demons with in himself.

***HINT The organisation is NOT SPECTRE***

[Agent Ostlund]

First off to answer your question Hopkins: I will start writing again once the strain of the new school year has wore off a little bit. As for a title, I will think of one and get back to you whenever I can.

[Jim]

***HINT The organisation is NOT SPECTRE***

If that's a hint, wouldn't want to be near you shouting.

How about "The Lost Plot"?

[Hopkins 009]

In this First Installment of my James Bond series Bond will take on an adventure that will take him to Napoli, Tokyo, Ukraine, and the final action in New York. Along the way he will face off with some deadly assassins along with beutiful women. Bond doesnt trust anyone but he will learn that he cant do it alone. Bond will also learn of a organisation that is thought to be dismissed will arive once again. If Bond is going to succeed against his enemies he will first have to battle the demons with in himself.



***HINT The organisation is NOT SPECTRE***

[dinovelvet]

Along the way he will face off with some deadly assassins along with beutiful women. Bond doesnt trust anyone but he will learn that he cant do it alone. Bond will also learn of a organisation that is thought to be dismissed will arive once again. If Bond is going to succeed against his enemies he will first have to battle the demons with in himself.

***HINT The organisation is NOT SPECTRE***

Based on that, er, "plot", how about the title "Generic James Bond adventure no. #435"

[Garth007]

"The Battle Within"

[Qwerty]

[Moderator's Note: Topics merged]

[Nilles]

Hm, elaborate on "his demons within", for a more in depth story line, once you have your basic layout, the filler information should then come easier, think of your Beginning, Middle, End.


Get your Background information, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action, and Resolution, then fill in with ideas, such as random things the enemies could do to attempt to assassinate, injure, or fatally wound Bond, which of course he'd live through, because HE IS James Bond.

or at the end kill off the main character


-Nilles

Edited by Nilles, 19 September 2007 - 12:18 AM.

[Hopkins 009]

Yes, Good Thinking Niles. "Demons with-in" such as Vesper Lynd. He misses her still, he feels guilty about her death. He tries to conver up that he still misses her. He has tries to hide all his emotions.

[Hopkins 009]

Im thinking of....


Within the Land of Liberty



*since it has a big part in New York

[Jim]

Im thinking of....


Within the Land of Liberty

Are you? I'm thinking of having a nice chucky egg for my breakfast. I fear that only one of our thoughts is likely to come to any sort of fruition and given that the water's just coming to the boil, I know where my money lies.

Try writing the story first.

[Jim]

Im thinking of....


Within the Land of Liberty

Are you? I'm thinking of having a nice chucky egg for my breakfast. I fear that only one of our thoughts is likely to come to any sort of fruition and given that the water's just coming to the boil, I know where my money lies.

Try writing the story first.

The chucky egg was very nice.

How's the story coming along?