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[Jaws0178]

Sounds like a bad mission, don't it This is a thread to discuss my story Operartion: Golden Trap

[Qwerty]

Added a discussion link to the story.

[Jaws0178]

Grazie, sir. I sent it to you screwy. Its fixed now,

[Qwerty]

Chapter 5 up now!

[Jaws0178]

Just for everyones information, I'm probably gonna catch flak for this, but I am going to kind of change the direction Golden Trap is going. It's still 007 vs Goldeneye, but the secondary story is how 007 realizes that the years are catching up to him.

[Monsieur B]

How would you catch flak for it? It could add spice to your story. Bond starting to feel his age catching up, starts to feel his physical ability slipping and it nearly gets him killed. Then Bond would have to get his groove back in the end. He just has to.

[Jaws0178]

Oh surely. He already has nearly lost his gun. You'll understand when you read it, hopefully. The reason I figured I'd catch flak, is that alot of people never want to see their hero get older. Groundless fortunately. Also, understand, I do realize that my manuscript may not be exactly factual, but thats my its fiction, I think.

Edited by Jaws0178, 16 September 2006 - 04:10 AM.

[Jaws0178]

Okay, Chapter Six has been sent in. I'm curious if anyone notices the little joke I put in. I will be out of town til Tuesday, but will have access to the net so I will hopefully continue working on the story. Let me know how everyone likes it thus far.

[Qwerty]

Chapter 7 up now!

[Jaws0178]

Good to see ya again, Qwerty.

[Qwerty]

Chapter 8 up now!

[Jaws0178]

Due to circumstances beyond my control (ie: my laptop is in Raleigh at the moment), it is gonna be a while before I am able to update Golden Trap, but I promise I'll update it. Ya'll have a good day.

Todd

[Jaws0178]

Okay, I finally got my laptop back. Had to fight off 12 Spectre agents to get it (boy, you'd figure something important was on it ) and am busy working on the Trap again. Be warned something serious happens. Stay tooned and beware, my Inet time is very limited

Edited by Jaws0178, 25 May 2007 - 11:58 PM.

[Jaws0178]

Okay, I've started Chapter Nine and have made a few changes to the rest of the story. More later

[Jaws0178]

OK, to all the fans of this story. Don't give up on me. The changes I made got lost when my computer crashed, along with Chapter Nine. I am printing out what I have so that I can write chapters on the story for real (IE: with a pen) Once I have enough written, I will type it up, and post it. Again, bear with me. I will not disappoint. Thanks for the support.

Michael Hunter will return

[Jaws0178]

Okay, as promised two months ago. Michael Hunter has returned, after a fashion. Chapter Nine has been uploaded, now just waiting for a mod to okay it. I have added a little bit of humor. As usual, let me know what you think.

[Qwerty]

Sorry for the delay.

New addition up now.

[Jaws0178]

Okay, I don't know what the new policy is for uploading fanfiction stories are, but sinces Chapters one through eight are gone, I am going to be reuploading this story. I was going to do it sooner, but first my laptop finally gave up the ghost (HDD as far as I know is still okay, but the case and Windows were, as they say, screwed. then I downloaded an old version from here, and all the apostophies were turned into question marks. Then, we moved to South Dakota, and I thought I had lost the story for good because my computer died, and the wifes computer died. Now we have hers back, and I happened to have found the copy that I downloaded in 09. It has since been saved to my SkyDrive, and once I find out the requirements for uploading, I will be reuploading it to CBN.