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#1 Deacon_Frost

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Posted 30 March 2002 - 10:42 PM

I was wondering if you guys could help me come up with a title for a fan fic.

Here's the plot.

Two MI6 agents were murdered after an investigation in The Ukraine. When law enforcement officials their bodies, both bodies had been enbalmmed (blood was taken out of body). James Bond is sent to investigate the murders. The track leads to a man name Matvey Dragenger. Dragenger is a half Romanian, half Ukrainian scientist/terrorist. He was tested on by some scientists years ago. The scientists were trying to develop a new virus for the new age of bio-terrorism. The inserted their newly made virus into Dragenger. The virus rapidly eats away at all blood cells. The virus eats away the blood cells so fast that in order to survive the carrier must replenish his body with someone else's blood. Dragenger earned the nick name "Drac" short for Dracula because of his bloody drinking ways. Drac DOES NOT bite people on the neck he simply buys bottles of blood from hospitals and drinks it.

Drac seeks vengeance against the world for who he blames caused the creation of his virus. So at the upcoming UN Summit, Drac plans to unleash the virus that is bested in him and infect everyone at the Summit. Unless Bond can do anything to stop him.

#2 RossMan

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Posted 31 March 2002 - 06:15 PM

Deacon_Frost (31 Mar, 2002 12:59 a.m.):
I'm using The Essence of Life or When Darkness Falls


I like When Darkness Falls. I think I'd like Dragenger as the title, I love the titles named after the villains.

Sounds like a very original story, I'm sure it'll be great. That's a great concept for the villain. Can't wait to read it!

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Posted 31 March 2002 - 01:04 AM

Great :)

#4 Deacon_Frost

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Posted 31 March 2002 - 12:59 AM

I'm using The Essence of Life or When Darkness Falls

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Posted 31 March 2002 - 12:26 AM

*Shadows On The Knife
*The Eccence Of Life
*When Darkness Falls
*Dead Beyond Repair
*Blood, Sweat and Death
*ShadowKiller
*Death Always Dies
*Live To Die
*The Man Who Steals Blood (:))
*Always, Never Alive.

There are some I could think of :)

#6 Deacon_Frost

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Posted 30 March 2002 - 10:51 PM

The horror aspect is part of the theme. I wanted to give a darker edge to Bond.

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Posted 30 March 2002 - 10:50 PM

Always Half Alive?

That's just something that came quickly into my head...it probablt sounds more like some horror film...but there it is...

#8 Jacques Nexus

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Posted 10 April 2002 - 01:31 PM

Deacon...I know I'm late but why not try these titles on for size ?:

HALF-LIFE
VAMPIRE WING DOWN
RED REVENGE
UKRAINIUM
DESTRUCTO
IT CAME TO KILL
BLOOD ENEMY
THIS ANIMAL IS DANGEROUS
MASS DESTRUCTOR
VAMPIRE EMPIRE

#9 Deacon_Frost

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Posted 13 April 2002 - 05:05 PM

As I promised my first finished product of Aqua Bullet is complete. Enjoy!

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Posted 13 April 2002 - 05:25 PM

IMPORTANT READ: There are some gramatical errors I missed. So just be aware.


And one more thing. If you come across the name Secht, it mean Kraiden. Kraiden's original name was Secht until I changed it.

#11 Deacon_Frost

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Posted 14 April 2002 - 03:01 PM

I am proud to say that Aqua Bullet is now COMPLETELY FINISHED. I'm done with all the editing and everything. So if you're interested read the short story.

#12 Jacques Nexus

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Posted 15 April 2002 - 03:22 PM

Well done, Deacon. It's a really entertaining piece of work. It's an imaginative larger than life storyline coupled with beautifully named villains. I loved the way you combined TSWLM with TWINE. And most importantly..."AQUA BULLET" is a cool & Bondian fan fic title. So much so I'm printing it out for my fan fic portfolio.

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Posted 16 April 2002 - 10:48 PM

Terrific little piece. Very creative, I loved what the villain does with oil pipeline. Original title.

Well done!

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Posted 23 April 2004 - 11:59 AM

This has always been one short story that I've desperately wanted to read but I can't find it anywhere.

Is there any chance that it can be put up for download again?

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Posted 17 May 2004 - 11:56 AM

Anyone know anything about it or have a copy?