![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
![Photo](http://www.gravatar.com/avatar/9ea5e65c92b78b83847dc9f285953563?s=100&d=http%3A%2F%2Fdebrief.commanderbond.net%2Fpublic%2Fstyle_images%2Fmaster%2Fprofile%2Fdefault_large.png)
Off Balance
#31
Posted 03 September 2004 - 07:16 PM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
#32
Posted 07 September 2004 - 01:07 PM
Cracking cover again, another Mr * am i to presume?
#33
Posted 07 September 2004 - 01:14 PM
Tell me athena, when you printed it off, did you you do it just like a book, or one page to one sheet?
That's a good question, Hawk. Yes, Athena, how much of your office's paper supply did you use?
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
Cracking cover again, another Mr * am i to presume?
Yup, that talented chap.
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
#34
Posted 13 September 2004 - 04:16 AM
#35
Posted 13 September 2004 - 04:31 AM
#36
Posted 13 September 2004 - 06:32 AM
You did? You liked it?I finished it a few days ago. Very cool stuff.
*jumps up and down in excitement*
Yay!
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/grin.gif)
Some things you especially liked, G? Or not so much?
And of course: does it make you want to read the sequel?
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
#37
Posted 13 September 2004 - 08:55 AM
I liked how you used the other 00-agents, especially the way you managed to incorporate elements from the Fleming novels into the story. The action sequences were well done and all of the good characters were richly drawn. A little more with the villains and maybe a little less of the IA duo might tighten up things a bit. Their part just doesn't seem to go anywhere. As for the sequel, I'm certainly looking forward to it.
#38
Posted 13 September 2004 - 03:32 PM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/thumbup.gif)
A little more with the villains and maybe a little less of the IA duo might tighten up things a bit.
You're right, those were my weak points and I'll certainly try to do a better job on that in the sequel.
Thanks for the comments.
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
#39
Posted 07 October 2004 - 05:24 PM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
Attached Files
#40
Posted 07 October 2004 - 05:47 PM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
#41
Posted 07 October 2004 - 07:07 PM
#42
Posted 14 October 2004 - 11:19 AM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
And I'm still reading! I promise to give you lots of feedback when I'm done.
#44
Posted 14 October 2004 - 02:10 PM
As a new member of CBN I'm looking forward to making the acquaintance of 009. I admire very much the dedication and hard work of all the fan fiction authors and only wish I could add to the burgeoning files of MI6 with a tale of my own. Sigh. I'll try and post some feedback in the future - but you might have to wait a while :-)
Great poster, by the way - it would be nice to see Brosnan do a 007 cameo in your film now that his licence has been revoked by EON/MGM...
Keep up the good work!
MESSAGE ENDS...MESSAGE ENDS...MESSAGE ENDS... :-)
Edited by Hitch, 14 October 2004 - 02:11 PM.
#45
Posted 14 October 2004 - 05:46 PM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
And yes, it'd be great if it could be a movie... but it can't.
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/frown.gif)
#46
Posted 14 October 2004 - 08:52 PM
And yes, it'd be great if it could be a movie... but it can't.
Who says it can't
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
#48
Posted 14 October 2004 - 09:06 PM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
EON should be taking the fine examples displayed amongst CBn's pages.
Great stuff, and thank you.
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
All the best,
Cheers,
Ian
#50
Posted 15 October 2004 - 03:32 AM
#51
Posted 21 December 2004 - 10:42 PM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
The Circle Trilogy
More content to follow, perhaps a sneek peak at the new novel in the future?
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
#52
Posted 22 December 2004 - 02:31 AM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/thumbup.gif)
#53
Posted 22 December 2004 - 02:55 AM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/thumbup.gif)
#54
Posted 22 December 2004 - 08:36 AM
#55
Posted 22 December 2004 - 10:04 AM
Very nice, Fenna. How's the new novel coming along?
Well, I've started working on the first few chapters, while still mapping the last ones out in detail. I feel there's still someting missing - mentally - for me to really get into it. I don't know what... but I'm going to find it.
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
Thanks for the comments everyone.
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
#56
Posted 02 February 2005 - 04:05 AM
Your work is very good! Hats off!
#57
Posted 02 February 2005 - 10:03 AM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
The woman on the cover is not me - I just gave Mr. Asterix a description of what I thought she would look like.
I'm glad you like my work!
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
#58
Posted 02 February 2005 - 12:18 PM
#59
Posted 02 February 2005 - 11:36 PM
#60
Posted 03 February 2005 - 09:06 AM
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
![:)](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/public/style_emoticons/default/huh.gif)