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The Man With The Golden Chain - Teaser


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#1 Righty007

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Posted 28 April 2004 - 11:57 PM

I quit writing Lockjaw due to my limited knowledge on the locales, etc. I started writing a James Bond parody novel called The Man With The Golden Chain.

Introducing Bondon. Jamal Bondon. Agent 0069.

Jamal Bondon is an African-American agent who works for the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) in New York City. He is a man with a shady past who was recruited by ,G, the head of FBI New York because he has special qualities they need for certain assignments. In The Man With The Golden Chain, Jamal will face a huge criminal organization that is in the drug dealing and prostitution business. The leader of this organization is the man with the golden chain, Gaylord Zydel aka Lord Z. Lord Z is a white pimp who thinks he is black. Jamal disguises himself as a drug dealer and tries to get into the organization so that he can find and kill Lord Z before it is too late. Will Jamal Bondon survive his first big mission working for the FBI?

I will post the first chapter when I am done writing it. The actual story may be slightly different than what is above.

#2 SPECTRE ASSASSIN

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Posted 29 April 2004 - 12:11 AM

Sounds funny so far!

#3 Qwerty

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Posted 29 April 2004 - 01:20 AM

I quit writing Lockjaw due to my limited knowledge on the locales, etc. I started writing a James Bond parody novel called The Man With The Golden Chain.

Introducing Bondon. Jamal Bondon. Agent 0069.

Jamal Bondon is an African-American agent who works for the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) in New York City. He is a man with a shady past who was recruited by ,G, the head of FBI New York because he has special qualities they need for certain assignments. In The Man With The Golden Chain, Jamal will face a huge criminal organization that is in the drug dealing and prostitution business. The leader of this organization is the man with the golden chain, Gaylord Zydel aka Lord Z. Lord Z is a white pimp who thinks he is black. Jamal disguises himself as a drug dealer and tries to get into the organization so that he can find and kill Lord Z before it is too late. Will Jamal Bondon survive his first big mission working for the FBI?

I will post the first chapter when I am done writing it. The actual story may be slightly different than what is above.

:) Whoo, whoa, whoa, what's with the last name, Zydel?!?

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Posted 29 April 2004 - 08:06 AM

Sounds great! :)

#5 Righty007

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Posted 29 April 2004 - 11:19 AM

:) Whoo, whoa, whoa, what's with the last name, Zydel?!?

That sounds like a last name I know of. :)

Thanks for lending me your last name.

#6 IanFleming007

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Posted 29 April 2004 - 10:11 PM

Sounds great....is this going to be just one story...or a series of spoofs?

#7 Righty007

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Posted 29 April 2004 - 11:33 PM

Sounds great....is this going to be just one story...or a series of spoofs?

Maybe a series if I can finish this one.

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Posted 30 April 2004 - 12:50 AM

:) Whoo, whoa, whoa, what's with the last name, Zydel?!?

That sounds like a last name I know of. :)

I knew someone might get upset over that name.

If the name of the boss is G, does the actually "Double-O" section become the G-Unit?

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Posted 30 April 2004 - 01:11 AM

If the name of the boss is G, does the actually "Double-O" section become the G-Unit?

Nice. :)

#10 Qwerty

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Posted 30 April 2004 - 01:13 AM

Crazy Chris, but I look forward to where you'll go with this. :)

#11 Righty007

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Posted 30 April 2004 - 01:23 AM

Hello there, Mr. 10108. I haven't talked with you in ages. I didn't think you still existed.

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Posted 30 April 2004 - 01:24 AM

It's good to see you too! My computer has prevented me to chatting on AIM, but it's great to see you.

:)