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[Goldmember420]

Heres where you can discuss and give me feedback for my story "If Looks Could Kill"

And heres the cover i made for it!

[Xenobia]

Hey Goldmember!

The story has some very interesting points to it...no pun intended!

I like the idea of bringing someone back from Bond's past, just to have them die, as a way of hooking him into the story.

Just two small points that you should keep in mind. When I started writing my fanfic, I was told never to allow the narrator to refer to Bond as "James." The characters could call him by his first name, but the narrator can't, if that makes sense.

Also, Bruce's wife sounds a little cold, when she brushes him off with "goodnight." You should try to make her a bit more sympathetic.

The cover is awesome...it says a lot about the story!

-- Xen

[Goldmember420]

Thanks! I'll work on that for the second chapter! I'm glad you told me!:-)

[Tarl_Cabot]

That title belongs to a cheesy Richard Grieco late 80's movie, fyi.

[Goldmember420]

haha, thank you, its just a working title, but i kinda like it, and the title has a lot to do with the story!

[Goldmember420]

I Put up Chapter 2 of my story, its called "Tea At Two"

[Xenobia]

It looks more like it was tea for three...and what an interesting threesome they are!

So how come M was so wrong with her information?

-- Xenobia

[Goldmember420]

You'll find that out in upcoming chapters:)

[Xenobia]

Looking forward to it.



-- Xen

[Goldmember420]

Chapter 3: "Proteggere La Preda" is now up!so get readin!

[Goldmember420]

Chapter 4 is now up!:-)

[Goldmember420]

ARGGG ive been trying to post up Chapter 5 of my fan fiction but it wont let me!!!! it says "you cannot post on this thread"!! so bare with me...

[Killmaster]

Just an interesting "By the Way". The group HEART with sisters Ann and Nancy Wilson recorded a song entitled "If Looks Could Kill" on theri 1990 self-titled album "Heart". It's got a good sound to it... maybe even Bondian. Give it a listen.