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[DanMan]

INT. DARK ROOM - LATER

Nothing in the room is visible, except for the outline of Bond's white shirt. We hear footsteps circling him and random words being spoken in spanish.

We see that Bond is slowly rising from the floor. Once he is up he pushes back his hair.

VOICE
Allow me to introduce myself...
(the man's voice is a mixture a
spanish and german accent, almost
giving the impression of
Bella Lugosi's Dracula).

All of the computer screens in the room turn on, creating a blur of different bright colors.

VOICE
My name is Leo Masters.

The man slowly approaches Bond. We see that he is a tall man in his late forites. He has black hair that is greying on the sides. He is wearing a black suite with a black tie.

BOND
My name is James Bond, but you
probably already new that.

MASTERS
Yes, yes. I've heard much about you.
Your suppose to be very good with
guns, cars, ladies... the fast life.

BOND
Certainly the latter.

MASTERS
Yes, HA! I knew it. A man who prefers
pleasure over buissness.

BOND
Buissness?

MASTERS
Guns, cars... That's what you specialize
in, no?

BOND
Of coarse. I was hoping I could bring
those skills into this organization.

MASTERS
I like you Bond. I think you can identify
with a man like me.

Bond nods.
MASTERS
Of coarse you can't just walk into
this organization.

A man walks up behind Bond and places a pistol to the back of his head. He is a very tall and muscular spanish man with a forehead that bulges out over his eyes. Bond quickly turns around and grabs the gun and shoots the man in the forehead. The man falls to the floor.

Bond turns towards Masters and aims at him, but Masters' already has a futuristic looking pistol pointed right at him with the laser-siding aimed right at Bond's head.

MASTERS
Congratulations. You passed the first
test. Never allow another man to threaten
your life.

Masters drops his gun. Bond smiles and does the same, but he doesn't relize the man that he had just shot is rising up behind him. He turns around to see the man standing straight up, with a bullet sticking out of his forehead.

MASTERS (V.O)
(While the man removes the
bullet sticking out of his
forehead.)

Mr. Bond, meet Hammerhead. Due to a
terrible accident a number of years
ago, I had to implant a rather large
metal plate into his forehead. It saved
his life.

Bond's face gives away his shock.

BOND
He did look a bit thickheaded.

Masters begins to laugh and Bond soon joins in on it.

MASTERS
A sense a humour too. I definetly like this guy.

[Qwerty]

Very cool Dan! "Guns, cars, ladies...the fast life." -Excellent line, works perfectly. Keep 'em coming!

~Devin Zydel --Qwerty--

[DanMan]

Thanks Qwerty!

[Qwerty]

Sure. Anytime, I like very much reading your work, very good.

[double0kevin]

wow hammerhead, a cool new badie you,ve got there.

when u gonna have the full script up for reading?

[Bond111]

Yet another great passage. Intriguing villain too. Oh and I love Hammerhead, brilliant. Keep up the good work.

[Righty007]

Great passage, DanMan.

[DanMan]

Thanks Righty.

[Genrewriter]

Very cool, I like Hammerhead.

[Xenobia]

What a cool villian! What a cool henchmen! And the coolest of all is Bond.

EXCELLENT STUFF! I can't wait to see the whole thing!

-- Xenobia

[double0kevin]

which pops the Question, when are we going to see the whole thing?

[DanMan]

Thanks Xen. Like I said in the other thread, high school assignments have really taken a chunk out of my free time and I'm writing a little every night before I go to bed. I'm hoping to have it up soon.

[Xenobia]

Writing a little bit every day is always good, and yes, High School must come first.

At least you have a good excuse the weekend of the sixth to stay in and write.

-- Xenobia

[double0kevin]

i just thought id pop in and say my bond novel "the fallen kill" is up and ready to read!