Another excerpt from my fanfic, coming up in 2004.
Off Balance - Teaser
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, Sep 23 2003 01:58 PM
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Posted 23 September 2003 - 01:58 PM
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Posted 23 September 2003 - 04:22 PM
Nice intro Joyce. Lavish, detailed but not done heavy handed. I'm curious as to what's ahead and (more importantly) what's afoot in this scene.
BTW - Like the mention of Brosnan being there - Good wink/cameo.
PM me if you are ever really pulling your hair out.
BTW - Like the mention of Brosnan being there - Good wink/cameo.
PM me if you are ever really pulling your hair out.
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Posted 23 September 2003 - 04:31 PM
Originally posted by Bryce (003)
Nice intro Joyce. Lavish, detailed but not done heavy handed. I'm curious as to what's ahead and (more importantly) what's afoot in this scene.
BTW - Like the mention of Brosnan being there - Good wink/cameo.
PM me if you are ever really pulling your hair out.
Thanks, Bryce. I will.
And the 'wink' is actually Xen's idea - she told me to be brave and do it.
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Posted 23 September 2003 - 04:41 PM
Xen's full of good ideas....
Anytime my dear;)
The real advice though is to be exactly that in your writing - Be brave. It's your story, do as you please - The tricky part sometimes is expressing it accurately.
Let me know. See you around the office.
*003 places "Bugger Off!...Writing..." sign on 009's door*
Anytime my dear;)
The real advice though is to be exactly that in your writing - Be brave. It's your story, do as you please - The tricky part sometimes is expressing it accurately.
Let me know. See you around the office.
*003 places "Bugger Off!...Writing..." sign on 009's door*
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Posted 23 September 2003 - 04:46 PM
Very nice start, Joyce. It really gives a good sense of location as far as descriptions go. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.
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Posted 23 September 2003 - 04:52 PM
Well stay tuned... I'm about half way through the novel, I still have a long way to go.
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Posted 23 September 2003 - 07:13 PM
It's so nice to see everyone else discovering what I have known for a very long time -- that JoyceCarrington is one very gifted young lady.
JC is taking a lot of risks with this novel, and in all the right places. I think Bond fans will really enjoy this story.
Oh and Bryce....
I'm full of lots of things, you're just to busy with 004 to find out.
-- Xen
JC is taking a lot of risks with this novel, and in all the right places. I think Bond fans will really enjoy this story.
Oh and Bryce....
Originally posted by Bryce (003)
Xen's full of good ideas....
I'm full of lots of things, you're just to busy with 004 to find out.
-- Xen
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Posted 27 September 2003 - 08:24 AM
So, non-007 fanfic is popular here as well. I've been met with mild interest in my upcoming 005 novel (the first of a good number) Death Is An Ally.
I've seen Joyce's excerpt, and I'm pleased to see another person willing to go out and take risks.
I've seen Joyce's excerpt, and I'm pleased to see another person willing to go out and take risks.
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Posted 15 October 2003 - 03:20 PM
Thanks everyone for the support!
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Posted 15 October 2003 - 07:42 PM
I definitely want to read more.
I love fan fiction I can't get enough of it. When about's in 2004 are you planning to release the finished story Joyce?
I love fan fiction I can't get enough of it. When about's in 2004 are you planning to release the finished story Joyce?
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Posted 15 October 2003 - 07:52 PM
Hoping to finish it February/March... but I just don't know.
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Posted 19 October 2003 - 07:24 AM
Wow.
I am looking forward to it.
I thank you for the opportunity, my dear lady.
It IS well done.
Based on the few other bits and pieces I have seen, you do have an excellent tough with the pen. And an eye for detail. Very important.
You are very correct, Xenobia.
She is excellent. But, then, who is better than you to say?
I am looking forward to it.
I thank you for the opportunity, my dear lady.
It IS well done.
Based on the few other bits and pieces I have seen, you do have an excellent tough with the pen. And an eye for detail. Very important.
You are very correct, Xenobia.
She is excellent. But, then, who is better than you to say?