I'd appreciate any thoughts on my fanfic, To Hell and Back, posted in the fanfic posting section. Thanks very much.
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To Hell And Back - Discussion
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Sigma
, Jul 15 2003 09:17 AM
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Posted 15 July 2003 - 10:34 PM
I've just finished reading it and I must say I really enjoyed it. It's really descriptive. I particularly liked the part about drugs being smuggled in RPGs. Very good. Will there be more to follow?
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Posted 15 July 2003 - 10:59 PM
I was kinda hoping for the rest, Sigma, I really liked it! As Chris said, very descriptive, very clever!
Hope you post the rest soon..I'll have to re-read the first part again to cement it in my mind!
**Was going to go and make some coffee, but now put off by Sigma's description!**
Hope you post the rest soon..I'll have to re-read the first part again to cement it in my mind!
**Was going to go and make some coffee, but now put off by Sigma's description!**
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Posted 15 July 2003 - 11:11 PM
Originally posted by Dunphboy007
As Chris said
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Posted 16 July 2003 - 12:19 AM
Whoops! I meant Craig!....Well....they both...begin with "C"
*makes a swift exit*
*makes a swift exit*
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Posted 16 July 2003 - 12:51 AM
What did I say?
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Posted 16 July 2003 - 01:51 AM
No no, I got Craig confused with Chris Bennett, a member of staff! Every time I see his sig, all I must do is read the first letter of his name.
I think i need sleep!
I think i need sleep!
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Posted 16 July 2003 - 07:39 AM
Regardless of who Chris is, or Craig is, thanks very much!
I've got a bit of the second chapter ready, i was gonna hold back on it but what the hell. I'll post it now.
Thanks all.
I've got a bit of the second chapter ready, i was gonna hold back on it but what the hell. I'll post it now.
Thanks all.
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Posted 17 July 2003 - 03:08 AM
The opening with Bond in the cafe was perfect. I like the description of the oil, his distaste for the cigarrette. It is very descriptive in a way that plays on the senses, and that is very good.
I can't wait to see more!
-- Xenobia
I can't wait to see more!
-- Xenobia
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Posted 17 July 2003 - 09:44 PM
Thanks for all the kind comments!
And thanks Xenobia, coming from the writer of HITFA (is that right?!) i must be doing something right. I've taken a step away from To Hell And Back 'cause i've had problems figuring out a certain party scene in Paris. In the meantime, i've written a bit of a movie style teaser for the piece, which i present below.
'Some men want to change the world.'
A meeting of the United Nations.
V.O. Campbell: "It is with the heaviest of hearts that i address you today."
And thanks Xenobia, coming from the writer of HITFA (is that right?!) i must be doing something right. I've taken a step away from To Hell And Back 'cause i've had problems figuring out a certain party scene in Paris. In the meantime, i've written a bit of a movie style teaser for the piece, which i present below.
'Some men want to change the world.'
A meeting of the United Nations.
V.O. Campbell: "It is with the heaviest of hearts that i address you today."