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Beyond The Ice - Discussion

Started by Xenobia , Feb 07 2003 02:54 AM

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#1 Xenobia

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Posted 07 February 2003 - 02:54 AM

I think you have a very promising beginning. Bond waking up in bed with a beauitful woman is always an excellent way to start a story.

I am not too sure however about Bond disarming a bomb by firing on it. You might want to think of a different way for Bond to get the bomb disarmed.

Also, I would love to know what Samantha's bad dream was about.

Great beginning!

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Posted 23 April 2004 - 11:50 AM

A nice intro there. A few things about Bond could be changed though.

How's this coming along, have you written anymore?
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