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#1 terminus

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Posted 17 December 2002 - 05:52 AM

I'd like peoples opinions on this, please. I'd like to continue it as I quite enjoy the story and I have a few ideas.

Just so you know, Mr. Shadow is the Head of a Spectre-like organisation known as HALO. If you've been over on the Coming Attractions BBS then you'll already know the storyline, if not ...

also ...

nanako matsushima as sierra monaco
timothy dalton as mr shadow



STORMCALLER



GUN BARREL OPENS ON ...

a train bullets past the camera. as soon as we take this
in, however, we:

cut to a bedroom on the train.

bond enjoys an attractive japanese woman, sierra monaco.
there is a bottle of champagne next to the bed ...

sierra moans with pleasure.

sierra: oh, james !

we dissolve through to later.

sierra and bond are on the bed. sierra is smoking.

the train suddenly stops. sierra is thrown from the bed.
lights flicker ...

sierra: i don't think this was a scheduled stop.

bond: your capacity for understatement never fails to
amaze me ...

cut to a corridor on the train.

bond and sierra appear out of a doorway. bond listens to
someone on a walkie-talkie ...

bond: (urgent) the crew report that a hatch has been
opened without proper authorisation. carriage b ...

bond and sierra run ...

cut to carriage b

a japanese man is standing by an open hatch with his own
walkie talkie.

japanese man: we are go.

the man jumps out of the hatch as bond and sierra appear.
bond pulls out his gun and shoots ...

the man falls to the ground. bond leans out of the hatch
and looks round.

bond sees a service car behind the train. it proceeds to
move away from the train.

sierra taps bond on the shoulder. bond turns to see that
the japanese man has attached a bomb to the fixtures. it
is ticking down ...

bond: oh, bollocks ...

bond looks at the bomb and takes an estimated guess. he
empties several rounds into it. it sparks, flickers and
then dies ...

bond: one problem solved. one to go ...

bond looks out of the hatch. the service car is now too
far away to reach on foot.

bond rushes away from the hatch to ...

cut to the aston martin vanquish

bond and sierra jump into the car. bond taps the button
marked ignition. the car revs to life ...

bond: car. arm missiles ...

outside, the headlights slip back to show missiles. and,
inside, a joystick slides out of the dashboard ...

bond uses the joystick and clicks the button.

the missiles smash into the carriage wall leaving a gap
through which bond drives the vanquish.

the vanquish hits the train tracks and chases after the
service car ...

seconds later, the vanquish catches up with the service
car. on it, there are two japanese men with rifles ...

the two japanese men turn to fire on the vanquish. but,
motion seeking guns rise from the bonnet.

bond laughs. he turns on an exterior speaker.

bond: i suggest you drop the guns ...

the vanquish and the service car have matched speeds.

bond ejects the roof and climbs onto the bonnet as the
two japanese men drops their guns.

sierra takes the wheel.

bond climbs onto the service car.

japanese man 1: he won't fire on himself.

japanese man 2: yes. take him out now ...

bond: unfortunately for you, i speak fluent japanese.

bond smacks japanese man 1 in the jaw. he drops down
to the deck. japanese man 2 puts up a fight ...

japanese man 2 falls onto a lever and the service car
through a service tunnel and into a second tunnel.

the vanquish trails the service car.

sierra: james. there's another train coming !

bond pulls the lever again. but it is stuck and bond
is able to see the headlights of the train.

sierra panics and looks at the dashboard and presses
a button. studs drop from the tires of the vanquish
and sierra turns the wheel ...

the vanquish climbs the wall of the tunnel and very
narrowly avoids a collision.

the service car is hit by the train.

bond and japanese man 2 are thrown clear and into a
service tunnel.

japanese man 2 points his gun at bond. but bond just
laughs ...

sierra brings the vanquish to a stop behind japanese
man 2.

japanese man 2 turns as the motion seeking guns take
a lock on him and fire ...

after japanese man 2 falls to the floor, the motion
seeking guns retract. bond walks to the vanquish ...

bond: well handled, ms. monaco ...

bond jumps into the car and leans in to sierra.

bond: now, where were we ? ah, yes ...

bond engages sierra in a passionate kiss.

we slowly fade to ...

a bullet flies across the screen and the title song
begins to play.

Rupert Everett
As
James Bond, 007
in
Stormcaller

there are the usual dancing girls and guns. the girls
are made of fire and ice ...

we slowly fade to ...

a scientist walks past the camera. As soon as we take
this in, however, we:

legend: israel

cut to geiger's office

professor ari geiger is sitting at a desk working at a
computer. he sips a mug of coffee.

a mobile phone rings:

geiger: yes ?

male voice: proceed.

geiger: understood.

cut to stormcaller lab

numerous technicians work at computer stations.

geiger appears out of a doorway. he walks across to a
central computer station and puts a briefcase on it.

he removes a rebreather from his pocket, puts it on and
then opens the briefcase ...

a cloud of knockout gas erupts from the briefcase. the
technicians slump to the floor.

geiger inserts a disk into the computer. he produces an
explosive from the suitcase and attaches it to a monitor.

the monitor indicates that the stormcaller is slaved to
an unknown location.

then, geiger takes the disk from the computer and ...

cut to the stormcaller compound

geiger appears through a doorway with the briefcase.

a limousine comes to a stop next to geiger. the door is
opened and geiger gets in.

cut to inside the limousine

geiger sits next to mr shadow.

mr shadow: did everything proceed as we expected ?

geiger: yes ...

mr shadow: and the stormcaller interface ?

geiger: has been slaved to your mainframe.

mr shadow: good ... and the compound ?

geiger: has been dealt with.

mr shadow: good. mister geiger, i am impressed with
the level of your service ...

mr shadow points a gun at geiger.

mr shadow: ... yet, i will have to let you go. if i
could have the suitcase ?

mr shadow takes the suitcase and opens the door.

mr shadow: goodbye, doctor. it has been a pleasure
working with you ...

mr shadow gets out of the limousine.

cut to outside the limousine

mr shadow walks away from the limousine.

mr shadow: and an even greater pleasure to kill you.

the limousine explodes and then, a second later, the
stormcaller compound also explodes.

mr shadow walks towards a bmw ...

cut to outside a boeing jet

the jet cruises through the sky.

alexx: oh, james !

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Posted 23 April 2004 - 11:52 AM

Great opening there. Have you done anymore on this recently?