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#1 Greene Planet

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Posted 22 June 2009 - 08:46 PM

I A N - F L E M I N G ' S
J - A - M - E - S -- B - O - N - D

007

in


VENGEANCE



JAMES BOND IS BACK IN ACTION
AND BETTER THAN EVER







PRE-TITLE SEQUENCE SCENE COMING JUNE 25th


June 17th, 1946


They’d been searching for James Bond now for six months. Their intelligence was wrong once again as they soon found that Bond wasn’t in Royale-Les-Eaux.
Sean McDonough stood outside the casino as his colleague, Mathew Settle, searched the ground floor. McDonough casually lit a cigarette and inhaled the smoke deep into his dark lungs. This man was a top-class agent, or so his superiors had told him. Settle was a new recruit and was looking for an opening case that would increase his chances of quick promotion. The boy was fresh out of college and had a brilliant mind that should have been used for New York’s enthusiastic DA that was currently taking down the Mob. McDonough nearly felt sorry for him, wasn’t even old enough to buy a beer, and was a good kid.
McDonough took one last drag on his cigarette before flicking it away. Settle came out of the casino with a tired and mad look on his face.
The boy ran his fingers through his hair. That reminded Sean of Bastogne when he was in the service. He was 1st Sergeant of F Company, 3d Battalion. Throwing down your helmet and running your fingers in you hair meant you were at the breaking point. But this kid was just plain upset.
“Calm down. Its looks like we got bad intelligence on him.” Sean spoke as he glanced back at Settle.
“We’ve been ____ing looking for this prick for six goddamn months.”
McDonough glanced at the streetlights for a brief moment, thinking back to his Holland jump. Market Garden, he thought. Bad Intelligence. He remembered the briefing on the operation, “If we secure a series of bridges, that will allow a rapid advance of armored forces to push forward into Germany…we hope to end the war by Christmas (1944)…”McDonough broke out of his flashback and began to walk towards his car. Settle followed, and seemed to be pouting and whining all the way back to the now non-occupied French HQ for the organization. The two had an argument about the leader of SPECTRE, Ernst Stavro Blofeld, like he was in the service, or if he was always the CO rather than once being an agent. There were many questions to be asked about Blofeld. But one thing that was certain, he cannot be redeemed.

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Posted 22 June 2009 - 09:32 PM

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#3 Harry Fawkes

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Posted 22 June 2009 - 09:58 PM

Welcome back Mr. Greene Planet. We've been expecting you!


(Vengeance Looks good)

#4 Greene Planet

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Posted 22 June 2009 - 10:27 PM

Thanks for the warm welcomback. I seemed to have lost my password.
BTW, your writing is an influence on me in writing. I like your style.

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Posted 22 June 2009 - 10:52 PM

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June 19th, 1946
Langley, Virginia



“Goddamnit, Patterson!” Executive OSS Agent John Enders screamed into the face of an agent who served during the war, Private First Class Jimmy Patterson.
“What the ____ were you ____ing thinking? You are a goddamn Omaha beach survivor, you should ____ing know better. I ought to have you shot.”
Patterson exhaled, calming himself to speak, “sir, it was an accident. Private Polonsky had nothing to do with it.”
“Bull____!”
“But that’s good bull____.”
That managed to make Jimmy laugh, Enders joined in.
“Its alright, Jimmy. But I don’t wanna hear you do something back stupid again.”
Pfc Patterson nodded, “yessir.”
Enders looked down at Patterson’s dossier. He remembered back at the meeting earlier with Colonel Richard Sink…
“This morning, a British agent was provided with evidence of him assassinating a former Nazi commander. This man, Cdr. James Bond of the Royal Navy denied the claim and escaped police custody. It is believed that he is at large and dangerous, and the Prime Minister can’t afford the local police enforming the public that there’s a trained killer roaming London. And I was informed that Bond was the best they had, and he believes we have agents. And we all know that that’s true.”
Sink paused for a moment. “I want a an agent who served in the war. Enders that would be your department. Have an agent ready by tomorrow mornin’.”
Enders nodded and he lit a think cigar. “Yes, sir.”
Sink looked around the room, “meeting adjourned.”

Enders glanced back up at Patterson leaving the room "wait!"
"Yes, sir?"
"I've got a mission for you. This one is straight from Sink...

Edited by Greene Planet, 22 June 2009 - 11:18 PM.


#6 Greene Planet

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Posted 23 June 2009 - 02:39 AM

CHAPTER ONE
BROTHERS IN ARMS

COMING SOON




June 6th, 1944
Dog Green Sector, Omaha Beach


The roaring waves washed up the beach, soaking the sand and the anti-tank baracades.
1st Sergeant Felix Leiter of the US Army Rangers itched his whiskers after he lit his unusually large cigar. Once the men sighted the cigar, he began to wish they had there cigarette that they’d left back on the Washington. Captain Joe Miller stood next to Leiter, stuffing a wab of chew into the back of his mouth, while checking his ammo supply for his Browning Automatic Rifle (BAR). Most of the soldiers on the Landing craft were just out of high school, Leiter had the feeling that they didn’t want to be shooting M-1s, or throwing hand grenades rather than throwing baseballs. But their country need them. A “Call of Duty” Miller would always call it. Leiter prefered the saying “call to arms”. Leiter’s team was often called “brothers in arms”. He had to admit, it was a good title to have. It was this time that he wanted to join the paratroopers rather than the Rangers… “30 SECOND!” the Landing craft driver cut through Leiter’s thoughts and caught his attentions.
“Alright.”
The men turned to see him and quickly checked their ammo, “stay down, and make every bullet count. Good luck, and I’ll see you on the beach.”
Suddenly, the ramp went down, and the men infront of the two began to be blown to bits by MG-42 fire.
“GO! GO! OVER THE SIDE!”
the first three rows of soldiers were hit with death quickly and bloody.
Leiter jumped over the side and landed into the sea of blood…

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Posted 25 June 2009 - 04:15 AM

CHAPTER ONE :Brothers In Arms POSTED!!
CHAPTER TWO: Into the Storm COMING JUNE 27

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Posted 25 June 2009 - 12:38 PM

I'm right with you buddy.

PS
Once I get a cast list I will be expecting another poster

#9 Qwerty

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Posted 25 June 2009 - 07:11 PM

New addition up now.

#10 Greene Planet

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Posted 26 June 2009 - 01:18 AM

CAST
Daniel Craig as James Bond
Tom Hanks as Fliex Leiter
Damien Lewis as Sean McDonough
Ron Livingston as Sgt. Enders
Matt Damon as Pfc James Patterson
Liam Neeson as Pvt. Petrenko

#11 Greene Planet

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Posted 28 June 2009 - 06:29 PM

I just posted Chapter 3, it should be up in a few hours or so.
Official CoverPS: CBn review is fake.
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Edited by Greene Planet, 28 June 2009 - 06:30 PM.


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Posted 28 June 2009 - 07:04 PM

THIS HAS BEEN RATED 5 STARS!!!
BY WHO? I have no idea.

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Posted 28 June 2009 - 08:03 PM

Next I will introduce Patterson's transfer to the 82nd Airborne, and I plan to tell the whole story. Including D-Day, Market-Garden, and the largest Allied jump into Germany.

PART ONE
AIRBORNE


CHAPTER THREE
OVERLORD


Edited by Greene Planet, 29 June 2009 - 04:36 AM.


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Posted 28 June 2009 - 09:43 PM

New addition up now.

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 04:36 AM

Thanks Qwerty, Chapter Two has been posted, Chapter three will take a few days

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Posted 10 July 2009 - 04:27 AM

Just posted chapter three, PS, info is from an 82nd Airborne website. I would like the dedicate this chapter to all Airborne, for saving my grandfather on Utah Beach.

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Posted 10 July 2009 - 02:22 PM

New addition up now.

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Posted 11 July 2009 - 01:49 AM

Thanks Qwerty.

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Posted 11 July 2009 - 10:41 AM

Fantastic twist! I like the story a lot. My father was a Para in the 7th Parachute Regiment of the Royal Horse Artillery (British Army) so believe me Greene Planet this is a bloody treat for me. Well done and a great idea. Fleming would've been proud...


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Posted 11 July 2009 - 08:08 PM

Thanks Mr Fawkes. I got the impiration to set Patterson in the Airborne from Medal of Honor and the fact that one of my Grandfathers was in the 82d. I look forward to reading the next chapter in the captivating Midas Gold...

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Posted 11 July 2009 - 08:08 PM

Thanks Mr Fawkes. I got the impiration to set Patterson in the Airborne from Medal of Honor and the fact that one of my Grandfathers was in the 82d. I look forward to reading the next chapter in the captivating Midas Gold...

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Posted 30 July 2009 - 06:34 PM

When can we expect the next instalment?