THE
KILLERS
PART ONE:
CHAOS
COMING SOON
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KILLERS
PART ONE:
CHAOS
COMING SOON
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LANGLEY, VIRGINIA
COMING SOON
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THE TWO GUARDS BRUSHED him as he set down he supplies to heal the wound. One of the employees had found the courage to come forward and put pressure on it. Harding gave her the signal to back away so he could work.
FINALLY, I CAN USE THE TRAINING to help someone not in battle, James thought.
Macarone groaned as the pressure was relived on the bleeding. Harding reached into the tool bag and pulled out a pair of small pliers. The man gasped in the thought of nauseating pain. Harding pushed through the access flesh and grasped the bullets with the pliers, the man’s face turned pale.
THE BULLET WAS OUT. Harding gave Macarone the whisky and Macarone drank in sips. The two men sighed as the employee put pressure back on.
Hope you don't mind but I couldn't resist putting that extract from your story up for show.
It is vivid. Descriptions are fast. Hardly time to breath. Action is fast paced and you don’t waist time with bull!
Yep, I think I’m going to like this one as much as TDA.
By the way - Like Pte Fawkes! He's now my hero
Harry Fawkes