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Edited by Qwerty, 18 February 2008 - 05:26 AM.
The Cairo Kill - Discussion
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, Feb 15 2008 08:33 PM
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Posted 15 February 2008 - 08:33 PM
Please let me know what you think about my short story posted here.
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 06:54 PM
Hey, Binyamin. I like it mate. It's fast and exciting and grabs you by the throat, if not the balls, in terms of tension. Having said that, one point/issue: you leave me on the edge of my ![[censored]](https://debrief.commanderbond.net/topic/45297-the-cairo-kill-discussion/style_emoticons/default/censored.gif)
ing seat to know what the is going on. Give me more. It is too short!
ing seat to know what the is going on. Give me more. It is too short!
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 08:05 PM
That was it? One page? 
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 10:14 PM
It's a work in progress ! 
Besides, writing is best done under the influence, and I've run out of tequila.
Besides, writing is best done under the influence, and I've run out of tequila.
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 10:31 PM
Barman get the man another Tequila before I shoot him! 
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 10:42 PM
What's this? Girl with a bun in the oven falls for our 007? Heresy!
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 10:44 PM
What's this? Girl with a bun in the oven falls for our 007? Heresy!
Hey, maybe it's 007's bun, and he simply doesn't remember?
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 11:03 PM
Wouldn't he recognize her, then?Hey, maybe it's 007's bun, and he simply doesn't remember?What's this? Girl with a bun in the oven falls for our 007? Heresy!
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 11:09 PM
Wouldn't he recognize her, then?Hey, maybe it's 007's bun, and he simply doesn't remember?What's this? Girl with a bun in the oven falls for our 007? Heresy!
Well, one can suppose he had had some Vodka Martinis, and it was very dark, and... well...
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 11:10 PM
Perhaps she's not really pregnant, but hiding the bomb under her dress...?Well, one can suppose he had had some Vodka Martinis, and it was very dark, and... well...Wouldn't he recognize her, then?Hey, maybe it's 007's bun, and he simply doesn't remember?What's this? Girl with a bun in the oven falls for our 007? Heresy!
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Posted 18 February 2008 - 01:40 AM
Perhaps she's not really pregnant, but hiding the bomb under her dress...?
There was an episode of J.A.G. where a Cuban woman smuggled explosives by being "pregnant"... Blofeld! Stop stealing ideas!
More to The Cairo Kill on the way....
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Posted 18 February 2008 - 05:51 PM
I've never seen J.A.G., Number Two...There was an episode of J.A.G. where a Cuban woman smuggled explosives by being "pregnant"... Blofeld! Stop stealing ideas!
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Posted 24 March 2008 - 06:49 PM
Hmmmmm... intriguing.