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Started by echomusic , Oct 05 2006 06:54 PM

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#1 echomusic

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Posted 05 October 2006 - 06:54 PM

http://debrief.comma...showtopic=34430

Here is the opening scene to my Brosnan starring version of OHMSS.
More to come shortly.

#2 DamnCoffee

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Posted 05 October 2006 - 07:04 PM

Its a really Cool piece :) but my only problem with it is that, personally, i couldn't see Brosnans Bond doing that :P

#3 echomusic

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Posted 05 October 2006 - 07:07 PM

Its a really Cool piece :) but my only problem with it is that, personally, i couldn't see Brosnans Bond doing that :P


That's what I wanted - the viewer to go, 'That's not the Bond we know.' and then, when you go through the whole journey, you see why he is so methodical about what he's doing.

Thank you for reading! :P

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Posted 06 October 2006 - 12:38 AM

So, this is kinda set AFTER the rest of the movie?

#5 Qwerty

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Posted 06 October 2006 - 01:19 AM

Added a discussion link to the story. :)

#6 echomusic

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Posted 06 October 2006 - 12:55 PM

So, this is kinda set AFTER the rest of the movie?


Second scenes are up today.

The opening and ending will bookened what happened, as if Bond is telling Cameron the story as to why he's going to kill him...

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Posted 06 October 2006 - 02:00 PM

I like the idea. :) I see sean doing these things. It is the sort of Bond he played. :P Would like to read the rest of it.

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Posted 06 October 2006 - 02:29 PM

I rather like it! I can totally see Pierce doing these scenes! :)
Pierce always looked best when he had the straight jaw, no nonsense look about him...

#9 Qwerty

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Posted 07 October 2006 - 12:38 AM

New addition up now!

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Posted 07 October 2006 - 09:32 AM

It great so far :) is this bond still Brosnan after the pre-titles?

you handled the Bond/Moneypenny banter perfectly btw :P

#11 echomusic

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Posted 07 October 2006 - 11:30 PM

It great so far :) is this bond still Brosnan after the pre-titles?

you handled the Bond/Moneypenny banter perfectly btw :P



Thank you for your comments! :P

Yeah, I figured that by Brosnan cutting his hair super short for the whole of the movie (excluding opening and ending) it would cretae a younger Bond in the mind of the viewer - albeit on a subconscious level, but who knows...?

I'm going to have more up next week.

Thanks for reading!

#12 Pam Bouvier

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Posted 09 October 2006 - 04:31 PM

This looks really promising. Look forward to your next installment. Feels very much like vintage Fleming (like your references to past Bond doings and characters, gives it consistancy)).

#13 echomusic

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Posted 09 October 2006 - 05:10 PM

This looks really promising. Look forward to your next installment. Feels very much like vintage Fleming (like your references to past Bond doings and characters, gives it consistancy)).


Thank you, I wanted to throw in references to the books as well as movies.
The Spy Who Loved Me novel references are the ones I'm most happy about right now.

Thanks for reading!
New scenes should be up later today!

:)

Edited by echomusic, 09 October 2006 - 07:41 PM.

#14 Qwerty

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Posted 15 October 2006 - 12:11 AM

New addition up now!

#15 DamnCoffee

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Posted 15 October 2006 - 01:42 PM

Echo!! Eon should hire you for Bond 22 :) your writing skills are spectacular :P

#16 echomusic

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Posted 16 October 2006 - 05:38 PM

Took a break from writing this weekend and wanted to show off my below average photo shop skills! :)

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#17 Qwerty

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Posted 16 October 2006 - 07:29 PM

Fun idea. :)

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Posted 17 October 2006 - 06:17 AM

Liked the new sequence a lot - it's putting an interesting modern spin on things and I'm enjoying the crisp, well written dialogue a lot !

#19 echomusic

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Posted 18 October 2006 - 02:31 PM

Liked the new sequence a lot - it's putting an interesting modern spin on things and I'm enjoying the crisp, well written dialogue a lot !


I'm glad you're enjoying the dialogue - I've been working really hard to try and get it right.

This last scene and the new one that will be up soon (The Bond/Draco exposition scene) has large portions taken from the book, but my first pass was done from memory so hopefully it will be a happy medium between the two.

#20 Qwerty

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Posted 18 October 2006 - 08:20 PM

New addition up now!

#21 echomusic

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Posted 24 October 2006 - 03:05 PM

New scenes have been submitted, will hopefully be up soon.

Difficult scenes to write - Bond actually being somewhat romantic.

More exposition coming up, then...the action!!!

We're getting there, people! We're getting there!

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Posted 24 October 2006 - 04:35 PM

Nice stuff, echomusic, just checking this out.

#23 Qwerty

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Posted 24 October 2006 - 11:28 PM

New addition up now.

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Posted 24 October 2006 - 11:31 PM

Thats a thought provoking read I never thought I would see pierce doing another movie but I just did thanks!

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 07:07 AM

Another fabulous scene - was kinda hoping that Blofield would be somewhere else other than Switzerland, as that's the sort of thing I'd see the Brosnan movies doing with a novel like OHMSS - changing the location.

#26 echomusic

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 03:15 PM

Thats a thought provoking read I never thought I would see pierce doing another movie but I just did thanks!



Best. Compliment. Ever.

Thank you.

#27 Qwerty

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 03:56 PM

New addition up now.

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 06:22 PM

Nice new scene, like seeing how Alec and Bond communicate. :)

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Posted 26 October 2006 - 05:54 PM

:) Great job! I love Tracy and I'm a HUGE romantic at heart! Hope there's more to come! :P

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Posted 27 October 2006 - 05:13 PM

:) Great job! I love Tracy and I'm a HUGE romantic at heart! Hope there's more to come! :P


Thank you! I was worried about the romance stuff. This woman has to do something to capture Bond's heart. He's also still young in his career so there is a part of him that is vulnerable.

More should be up tonight or tomorrow.

I'm starting to write my version of the scene that was rehearsed but never-filmed for OHMSS!

Action is on its way!
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