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[Bond_Bishop]

Hi!

I'm writting on a own Bond novel called "Above the Ice There is Only Fire". Here are some info:

James Bond 007 is back. After a bomb assassination in London which kills thousands of peoples Bond's new mission takes him to the castles of Prague, the channels of Venice, the slalom slopes of Switzerland, the hot beaches in Nice and the Effiel tower in Paris. Bond is searching for the terrorist league "The Spear" and it's leader Lucifer "Ice-Soul" Ice which has the plan to crush nations and create panic and then take over the world. On his mission Bond meets the former and beautiful MI5 agent Sarah St. George and together the trying to find a way to stop Ice. But Ice has many allies. The dangerous Harker Antique, the deadly beauty Adrienne Dawn, the gunman Texas Johnson and the deadly Xander Maguire. This will one of 007's most dangerous adventures ever...

Hope it's sounds good. It will be I promise. It will be many car chasings and ski chasings in it.

Edited by Bond_Bishop, 31 January 2004 - 07:00 PM.

[Jim]

Originally posted by Bond_Bishop
..and it's leader Jacob "Icesole" Ice...

Isn't that a bit too close to "(Another word for donkey) hole"?

And hi! to you, too.

[Bond_Bishop]

No! It is Ice Sole but I had put them together

[double0kevin]

sounds good, just change the jacob dude to ice ris r sumtin. cause ice sole sounds like hole.but so far it sounds good.

[Bond_Bishop]

Oh thanks for the feedback. I think I can change it to Icespear if that's sounds better

[BONDFINESSE 007]

icesole sounds just fine, if you like it...go with it

[Triton]

Icesole sounds like the sole's of his shoes are made of ice. Did you mean Icesoul and that his spirit is as cold as ice?

[Triton]

Icesole sounds like the sole's of his shoes are made of ice. Did you mean Icesoul and that his spirit is as cold as ice?

[Bond_Bishop]

Ohh, yeah! Thanks, it was that I mean really

[Icephoenix]

I must admit, it does sound like - you know. Although it is a nice concept, it's a little iffy. If it was me I would change it to something like Jacob Iceheart, but it's really up to you.

Good luck with it!

[Bond_Bishop]

Oh, thanks!

[Bond_Bishop]

Want some more info, Icephoenix?

[Blofeld's Cat]

Originally posted by Bond_Bishop
Bond is searching for the terrorist league "The Spear" and it's leader Jacob "Icesole" Ice which has the plan to crush nations and create panic and then take over the world.

Maybe the organisation could be called "Iced Inc," which would be in keeping, thematically, with the leader's name.

So what if it's being used recently! Just go with it.

[Bond_Bishop]

I want to keep the Spear but I think I change Ice's alias to Icesoul instead

[BONDFINESSE 007]

go with icesoul, sounds good

[Bond_Bishop]

Thanks for the support Bondfinesse 007

[Icephoenix]

I think Ice-Soul sounds cool, but not when it's smushed togther as such Every time I read it I tend to giggle.

[Kronsteen]

Sounds really cool Bond_Bishop

It's cool that you're from Sweden, as I am, and I'm writing fan fiction too!

[Bond_Bishop]

Oh, I'm from Karlstad. And I see you are from Stockholm. Nice!

Thanks for feedback Kronsteen!

[Kronsteen]

Bond_Bishop: Have you ever been to the Swedish Bond forum Casino Royale? If you haven't you should really go there!

If you go to www.agent007.nu and then click on the link Casino Royale you will find it! It's much fun there too you know

[Bond_Bishop]

JAMES BOND 007: Above the Ice - GADGETS

Here are some info Bond will use in Above the Ice.

Car: Porsche Carrera GT
Gadgets to car:
Machine guns
Flamethrowers
Sub marine mechanism
'Drive on the water' mechanism (It's something with the cars wheels)
Wheeljacker (It's a laser that can whack of wheels)
Rockets
Jetengines behind the registration sign

Quote: "Sometimes I really wonder if there is some place to put a engine in my cars, Major Boothroyd"

Watch: Rolex Oyster Sea Dweller
Inside the watch:
Sleepdarts
Laser
Steelwire

Thats it

[Bond_Bishop]

Hi again!

Thanks for all comments. It has been nice to see what you thought about it. Now I return to the novel, have a nice evening!!!

[Bond_Bishop]

Berjizank Weapon Factory, Kirgizistan

It was a big factory. About five factory houses and twenty barracs. The factory where close guarded with soldiers. Around everything there was a tall steelwall and around it was a big river. It were winter and the cold was unbearable. Snow fell from the air. Some of of the soldiers shivered. A dark-clothed shape slipped around one of the barracs. His name was Commander James Bond, agent 007 in MI6. He climbed up on the barrac and took of his backpack. He took out a sniper rifle and put on a silencer and a lasersight. Bond was nervous, the sweat ran down from his forehead down to the snow. He put his eye to the sight. The laserbeam where pointed on one of the soldier's neck. 'Only kill the soldiers that is nearby not the others' Bond thought and put his forefinger to the trigger. He fired. The bullet hit the soldiers neck immediately. The blood sprouted out and the corpse fell to the ground. The two other soldiers that were visable came running to the corpse. They talked on russian and looked around. Bond fired again. Two bullets hit the second soldier. The third saw Bond and fired with his machine gun. Bond roll away and took up his Walther P99 and fired five bullets towards the third soldier. The soldier shook his whole body when the bullets hit him and he looked at his bloodfilled armor. Then he fell to the ground and the blood covered the snow. Bond jumped down from the barrac's roof and ran fast towards the factory's entrace which was a metal door where it stood 'Entrace' on russian. Bond opened the door, slowly and walked in. It were a long corridor with some maps over the factory. It was some alarm-lamps but no doors. Bond heard voices and slipped slow towards another corridor. It were two well-built men and they were followed by five soldiers. One of the two wore a general-clothing and the other wore a simple black costume. Bond recognized the general. It was General Willem Raynor, the british general that disappeared during the battles in Iraq, months before. MI6 had belived that he had joined the terrorist and escaped to land nearby. The other man was unrecognizeable. He was blonde and spoke english in russian accent. "Can I collect the bomb today, General?" the blonde man asked. "Of course you can, mr. Ice. I likes to work with people with your extreme temper, hehe" Raynor said shrewd.


The chapter continues there but I only wrote the part where Ice is introduced, he falls down into the ice-fluid later in the chapter. Sorry if it is some grammar. I'm from Sweden and is not so good at grammar on english.

[Bond_Bishop]

I have increased the title and have wrote a new story. The complete title is "Above the Ice There is Only Fire"

[Tanger]

That title's a bit long isn't it?
Where are you from Bond_Bishop?

[Bond_Bishop]

I'm a from Sweden

[Bond_Bishop]

UPDATE:

Bond girl: Trinity St. George (former MI5 agent, currently in Venice)

[Qwerty]

I like the name, Bond_Bishop.

[Bond_Bishop]

UPDATE

Chapter list:

1. Infiltration in Kirgizistan
2. London Bomb
3. Time for equipment
4. Unknown villains
5. Ice-Soul
6. Hit and Run
7. Chase number 2
8. Relaxing in a jacuzzi
9. At the British Ambassy
10. Help from Felix
11. Venice
12. Trinity St. George
13. Assassination attempt
14. Cold Eternity
15. Ice's castle
16. A Bond on skiing
17. Trinity gets kidnapped
18. Beyond the Ice
19. For you, only
20. Skies above Europe
21. Alexandria in Africa
22. Adrienne Dawn
23. Got her
24. There is only fire
25. Glory Days
26. Hunting at Alexandria Airport
27. Adrienne's treason
28. Going to Nice
29. Water Scooter
30. In the Darkest nights
31. Bond vs. Ice-Soul
32. The capital of France
33. The siege of Effiel-Tower
34. End of all things
35. Brand New Mourning
36. New Ways

UPDATE:

Locations: London, Paris, Nice, Alexandria, Switzerland and Kirgizistan