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In Topic: New Bond Comics in 2016/17

11 March 2017 - 09:34 PM

Definitely a big film Bond influence with Black Box. It didn't push any boundaries but I still found it a fun read.


BLACK BOX is still ongoing, correct?

In Topic: Bond 17 Screenplays

31 January 2017 - 10:46 PM

It's the original Wilson/Ruggiero story outline that's been described in a few of the threads on here before. None of the Vegas scenes are in it.


Thanks! I'd love to get my hands on that other draft someday.

In Topic: Bond 17 Screenplays

30 January 2017 - 12:16 AM

If anyone is interested in this and can buy it   http://scriptcity.co...roduct&id=40668


Which draft is this? The one with the monster truck chase through Vegas?

In Topic: New gunbarrel tunes... re-recorded Moonrakers GB.

11 December 2016 - 06:37 PM

You never disappoint, Rich. Great work! 

In Topic: The Death Collector Screenplay

12 October 2016 - 08:44 PM

Hi Michael,


First off, welcome to the forums! I don't visit here as much as I used to, so this screenplay of yours happened to fly under my radar. By chance I visited the Fan Fiction section today and saw this topic from about two months ago. I just finished reading Act 1 so I'll share my thoughts:


- Cracking work on the PTS. I liked the small Fleming references with Magic 44 and later Mark Hazard. I feel inclined to mention that radical Islamic terrorism is something we'll probably never see in a Bond film; EON tend to veer away from overtly political plots and specific real world villainy. However, this is your script and I applaud you for not shying away from reality for the sake of political correctness. 


- Overall your dialogue is strong and sounds natural coming from the characters. I could hear the voices of Craig, Fiennes, and Harris clearly in my mind's ear while reading. The pillow talk between Bond and Maria was a little clunky but that was the only exchange that sounded slightly forced. 


- The Lupita Npyo name sounds far too similar to Lupita Nyong'o and I think the audience would pick up on that. I would modify her name to avoid this issue. 


I do hope you decide to continue on and finish the screenplay, as I think it has loads of promise!