JOHN SMITH - by Jimmy Sangster
Private I
(1967)
Jimmy Sangster’s hero John Smith is, I guess, meant to be as anonymous as his name suggests. That he isn’t is testament to Sangster’s neat prose which draws you into his protagonist’s ever decreasing world, one where spies and spy-masters vie for the upper hand against the opposition and one another. Smith isn’t in fact a spy; he’s quit the service after a disastrous operation in Algiers and is eking out a living as a private investigator specializing in marital infidelity. From one shoddy line of business to another, you might say. Curiously that is one of the comparisons Sangster chooses not to bite and the lack of obvious cliché should be applauded.
PRIVATE I was first published in 1967 and proved successful enough to launch a TV movie (under a new title ‘The Spy Killer’) and it inhabits much the same territory as those glum everyday trench coat wearers Le Carré loved so much. Smith is a good foil for his one-time boss Max, a mustachioed sleek deceptive streak of evil and true villain of the piece. He shows some humour, dislikes the cut and thrust of physical violence and is repulsed by the inhumanity of the spy game. He yearns for nothing more than a closer relationship with his regular roll Mary and a slightly healthier bank balance.
A chance meeting with his ex-wife, Danielle, leads Smith into a web of intrigue chasing a missing notebook crammed full of vital names and addresses which the Chinese are eager to discover and the British are eager to cover up. Throw in a murdered attaché, the local constabulary, the Albanian lone-wolf Igor Berat and a host of contacts from Smith’s past and you have a fairly tight if episodic thriller whose action is mostly tete-a-tetes between its main characters interspersed with the occasional bout of oblique action.
I couldn’t help but be reminded of Sangster’s later spy tales starring Katy Touchfeather, not only because the story is told in the first person, but also because the main character seems so helplessly lost all the time. Every little scheme goes wrong for John Smith, every person is out to betray him and every little good moment turns into a big bad situation. The story is quite bleak during its early pages and I didn’t initially warm to our hero, who is a poor man’s Philip Marlow, but his character grows on you. His remorse over the deaths he causes, his rejection of the Secret Service ethic and an apparent total amorality over money and sexual matters are quite refreshing, but we don’t see this from the outset.
In fact the opening of the novel is part of problem: “The slamming of the door sounded like the last crack of doom… I might as well have been embalmed, placed in a coffin, and buried a hundred miles deep.” Sangster rather telegraphs the outcome of his tale. We know Smith is looking back and we know he’s considering “the stupid, idiotic, bloody fool way I managed to get myself into this” so there is no surprise in the eventual outcome. Along the way there are plenty of quirks, twists and turns that prove diverting: a break-in to a crime scene, a picturesque but violent sojourn to the south of France, a Bourne-like visit to a Swiss bank and a tense night spent in the company of a deadly assassin – the latter a particularly good chapter that reveals Sangster’s ability with dialogue and framing; fully expected from a screenwriter but not always in evidence. However there is inevitability to the tale which erases most of the tension. Sadly it just doesn’t grip you enough.
I’m intrigued to know what the movie-makers did with it. I prefer the alternative title and also consider both examples of the cover art to be a bit ropy, bearing only a minor resemblance to anything within the book’s pages.