I agree that Fleming as a writer in general is quite underrated. But I think he had a weak spot that impaired on his oeuvre.
Some time last year I picked up Simon Winder's THE MAN WHO SAVED BRITAIN. It's a bit of a winding essay about Bond, Britain's society and politics and their correlation, all that interwoven with Fleming's persona and life. Consequently Winder also has to say the odd thing about Fleming's standard working routine:
"Fleming's first Bond novel, CASINO ROYALE, was written in 1952 and published in 1953 and the novels then came out at roughly year-long intervals. Indeed one of the points against Fleming is his mechanical approach to his own work - even down to length. DOCTOR NO for example is set up beautifully, with a compelling expressionist villain and lair and an incomparable picture of aspects of the West Indies, but all this elaboration comes to nothing as the story is hastily ended in rubbishy battles with giant squids and anaemic, under-realized rationales for No's wickedness. No's death, suffocated under tons of guano, provokes applause, but there is no way round the fact that Fleming simply has reached his word-limit and can't be bothered to go on. The pileof typed paper is nearly the right height - time for a big drink.
This style of output is a bit dismaying, as are almost all the books' uneven quality: if Fleming hit a dull patch he tended to keep plugging along rather than going back to fix it."
This part of Winder's book illustrates why I haven't come further than page 80 as yet, and it will not surprise you to learn that I don't agree with many of Winder's assessments. Nonetheless I suspect he actually may have a point here, especially the last sentence. Fleming did work by a certain schedule, and Fleming himself went to record as never looking back, lest he couldn't push on with his tale.
And on balance this may have been a mistake.
Take your example of GOLDFINGER here. The novel has numerous gaping holes in the fabric of its tale, and the various coincidences (Dupont spotting Bond, Bond getting the assignment to investigate Goldfinger's supposed method of smuggling - and hitting paydirt right away! - Bond then running into the sister of the dead girl) and inconsistencies (Goldfinger keeping both of them, even letting them work for his outfit) can spoil the fun of the whole book.
Here I think Fleming could have worked on getting a better result. If he just had invested more time into plotting and rewriting. If he had looked back and fixed the tricky parts.
Much the same can be said for MOONRAKER. This most captivating story with a brilliant villain, a surrealistic lair, one giant steele 'gunbarrel' complete with projectile, and a number of the best scenes in the whole series (bridge, Bentley-Mercedes chase, blowtorch, steam hose, shower-countdown) sadly also suffers from numerous terrible plotholes. Here the combined forces of MI5 and Secret Service miss not just one Nazi war criminal, they let a whole team of them work away on a prototype rocket right under their noses. Consequently, the term 'vetting' never is mentioned in Fleming's books. Still, this is entirely beyond belief and can't really withstand the light of day. Only conclusion here would be that numerous high-profile figures in the security services and the government are in on the plan and actively support its advance.
And the Russians hardly fare much better. If the Soviet Army (as suggested in FRWL) provided the means to this lunatic venture, why ever aren't they prepared to move right after Britain is decapitated? Surely the only gain of such a plot would have been a fast and relentless dash across Germany (in retaliation for the attack on a WW II ally) and further across Western Europe? Nothing hints to any moves of the Russians after Drax's attack. As if they didn't know of it.
Finally Drax himself seems a bit fixated on his V² weapon. When the Russians deliver the atomic warhead the logic move would have been to load it into the Mercedes (or a lorry provided by the War Ministry) and just stash it way in the flat in Ebury Street. And let it detonate right there on the spot. But that would have made all the effort with Columbite and the Moonraker and the site near Dover completely redundant.
I believe some of these problems could have been dealt with if the effort had been made. Personally I don't much care either way, I enjoy my GOLDFINGER and MOONRAKER just as well in their present form. But Fleming leaves himself unnecessarily open to critque where he could have avoided it.
Edited by Dustin, 07 February 2012 - 08:07 PM.