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#31 volante

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Posted 04 August 2013 - 01:06 PM

Chapter 11 in for submission

 

Bond snatched up the Heckler & Koch and opened the door. Bullets ripped into the dark wood. The flashes from the guns were close. Instinctively Bond threw the grenade he’s taken from the back pack, it exploded with a loud pop, the firing stopped.

   

“Click” Bond’s ear piece began buzzing “R U OK?”

   

“Sure, just met some more guests we’re just having a little house warming” Bond stepped through the door into a scene from hell.

 

The grenade had exploded in front of one of the guards killing him instantly, he was spread over the landing his partner was slumped against the wall he began to raise his machine pistol.

Bond fired a burst from the Heckler and Koch.

   ‘Click’ “It's just that it seems a little noisy for a break in”

 

    “A brief encounter, that's all. I'm on my way back to you now” Bond was half way down the stairs when the lights came on.

    The unmistakable figure of Mr. Babone lumbered into the hallway.



#32 Dustin

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Posted 04 August 2013 - 01:16 PM

Read it here: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1266260

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Posted 13 August 2013 - 10:36 AM

Chapter 12

In for submission

It's a little late I know, but I was on holiday.

 

Anyway here's a taster

 

“So who does he work for, and why was he at the house trying to kill me?”

Elvis laughed, he angled his body for best effect.

    “Babone works for General Medrano”

Bond’s face gave nothing away

    “Medrano?” Bond played the name as if it were the first time he’d heard it

    “General Medrano, deposed dictator? Bolivia. Ring any bells?

Bond’s left palm came up. He slapped it off his own forehead

    “Of course” Bond’s right hand snaked out and caught Elvis in the throat. Bond’s left hand now dropped and seized the gun. Elvis moved to intercept but Bond continued the right hand movement and he smashed his elbow into Elvis’s face. A moment later Bond had the gun aimed at Elvis’s heart.



#34 Major Tallon

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Posted 13 August 2013 - 10:56 AM

Glad another chapter's in the works.  Always good to see you back and writing!



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Posted 13 August 2013 - 11:05 AM

It's here: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1266686



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Posted 13 August 2013 - 03:00 PM

Glad another chapter's in the works.  Always good to see you back and writing!

Thanks Major, I'm enjoying the freedom of re-touching some old ideas.

It's nice to see the old story coming to life again.

 

Cheers

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Posted 20 August 2013 - 04:20 PM

Chapter Thirteen in for submission

 

Enjoy



#38 Dustin

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Posted 20 August 2013 - 05:14 PM

Read it: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1267016

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Posted 26 August 2013 - 08:56 AM

Next chapter: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1267281



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Posted 27 August 2013 - 11:37 AM

Having re-vamped EDGE OF TREAON I will of course be looking to re-vamp my take on the tragic death of Diana Princess of Wales. I thought all the angles (except my new approach) had been covered, and then today I read the Daily Express only to find the headlines full of my latest version.

 

Major Tallon keeps saying I'm always one step ahead of the news, but this is quite spooky...especially with a "Diana" film coming out soon

 

French authorities failed to hand over a key part of the Mercedes from the Paris tragedy.

And an official report was omitted from inquiries into the 1997 crash – with clues highlighted by a top British investigator withheld from the inquest into Diana’s death.

World renowned accident examiner David Price meticulously deconstructed the luxury car. But he told last night how he was “surprised” never to have been called to give evidence at the hearing. The shambolic handling of the initial investigation into the accident even saw parts of the car destroyed while in the possession of the French authorities.

But the most explosive revelation to emerge from his report was that a foot-long section of brake pipe – leading to the front right brake – was never handed over to British investigators, making it impossible to disprove tampering.

The revelations come after claims Diana was killed by an elite team of SAS and MI6 agents on motorbikes acting on orders from Buckingham Palace.

Institute of Traffic Accident Investigators expert Mr Price conducted a forensic examination and his report was used by the authors of Operation Paget, the police probe into the fatal crash.

But the blunders cast fresh doubt on the credibility of official inquiries after Diana died alongside her Muslim lover Dodi Fayed and driver Henri Paul.

The vehicle’s brake fluid was found to contain a level of water that could have interfered with braking efficiency, but it was brushed off as post-crash contamination.

Its front right tyre contained “a considerable quantity of water”, which was never measured or analysed to determine its origin, potentially affecting the handling of the vehicle.

Reports that the car had been handling poorly before the crash were never recorded as part of Operation Paget, the inquiry led by Lord Stevens which investigated conspiracy theories surrounding the accident.

Mr Price, 55, who worked for the Forensic Science Service for 31 years, told the Daily Express from France last night: “It was a surprise I was not called to deal with some of these issues.

“The inquest spent a lot of time with witnesses who saw things and heard things but it didn’t ask questions about the car itself. Issues were being raised such as brake tampering so I was surprised not to have been called.

“The frustrating thing for me is that my report is not freely available because this was such a high-profile case and I’m not trying to hide anything.”

In his report he wrote: “I am not able to exclude the possibility of brake pipes having been cut prior to the incident, although I consider it highly unlikely that they had been, as it should have been readily obvious to the French investigators when they removed the ABS modulator.

69811.jpgThe aftermath of the crash in the Paris

The frustrating thing for me is that my report is not freely available because this was such a high-profile case and I’m not trying to hide anything

Examiner David Price

Chauffeur Olivier Lafaye drove the car hours before the crash and reported the back end “slewing out” at speed. His comments were not recorded in Paget and he was not called at the inquest.

“Whilst I did not observe any signs of staining that I considered might have resulted from brake fluid having been ejected during use, I consider the extent of the damage and the existence of smashed oil-containing items, such as the engine, precluded me from being entirely certain.”

The report, obtained under Freedom of Information laws, showed the car’s Electronic Control Unit, responsible for the brakes, had a “fault” code stored.

Mr Price wrote: “I consider it most probable that one or more wheels had skidded. I am not an expert in electronics and so I consider it probable the only persons who could provide expert evidence in the precise functioning of the units would be design engineers.”

He added: “Only they are likely to have knowledge of the precise operating parameters.” But Paget ignored this lead, simply stating: “David Price concluded that no additional testing was possible.

“He considered that the conclusions reached by the French investigators, that the codes had been created at the time of the crash, were most probably correct.”

Paget concluded both the French and British examinations of the Mercedes showed there were “no mechanical issues with the car that could have in any way caused or contributed to the crash”.

Paint taken from the tunnel and the car and its front right door were lost in an “unexplained fire” in 1999. Its front wing was also destroyed on the orders of a French judge in 2003.



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Posted 02 September 2013 - 01:28 PM

Chapter 15

In for submission.

 

“What about Rashid. Any trace on his whereabouts?” asked Bond 

    “Bond! Forget Rashid, he’s a no one. The money and Greene have been connected. Whatever is going down is about Bolivia, everything that’s happened since Le Chiffre took the money of the African rebels has been about Quantum getting their man into power in Bolivia”

    “I take it you want me to go to Bolivia?”

    “Obviously. Now as I’ve told you Bond the girl isn’t in any danger, so there isn’t any reason to delay you. Is there?”

    “Absolutely not”

    “You’ll be heading to South America straight away then?”

    “Yes Ma’am” Bond disconnected the call.



#42 Dustin

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Posted 02 September 2013 - 02:08 PM

Read it all here: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1267571

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Posted 07 September 2013 - 09:35 AM

Chapter 16 coming on line soon...

 

To keep you posted, I have now finished and submitted the screenplay for Everything or Nothing, my second short story to be converted into film.

 

The first film RISQUE will be released in November

 

Having completed this work I can now concentrate on NEVER THE DEATH

Until then, please enjoy the latest chapter of EDGE OF TREASON



#44 Dustin

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Posted 07 September 2013 - 10:20 AM

Here's chapter 16: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1267787

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Posted 15 September 2013 - 10:14 AM

Chapter 17: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1268038



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Posted 23 September 2013 - 10:01 AM

Chapter 18 now online: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1268441



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Posted 24 September 2013 - 12:07 PM

Thanks for the support, I hope everyone is enjoying the updated version of my first novel

EDGE OF TREASON

Downloads to date 5750 (although a number of these came when it was first released in 2008

The story is an alternative time line to the film Quantum of Solace.

 

The rest of my back catalogue looks like this:-
 

My first original story
SILHOUETTES & SHADOWS started 22/09/2008 downloads 4853

When an otherwise impeccable financial source funds a biological weapons transaction…

…James Bond is sent to investigate the mysterious new owner of the Swiss bank responsible…

…and uncovers a powerful secret organisation that has its roots enmeshed

in the Third Reich and its sights set on challenging the superpowers of today.

The race is on to stop the weapon being deployed, but who can Bond trust?

A disgraced DOJ agent wanted by the FBI

An Israeli scientist at odds with the CIA

Even his old friend Felix Leiter cannot be relied upon in a world controlled by silhouettes and shadows

TO KILL AND DIE FOR started 11/04/2009 downloads 4990

A bitter Kremlin power struggle endangers Europe's oil and gas supplies.

After an attempt on his life, former KGB spy master
Vladimir Chenko turns to MI6 for protection.

M knows she must send her best agent to eliminate the killer hell bent on fulfilling his contract.
Failure now could lengthen the shadow of war across the globe.

Old friends; new enemies and a sadistic killer make this mission the toughest yet for 007

In Ornella, James Bond discovers a resolve to trust and lie for.
In Stasi, he finds the trail of death and destruction as a just cause to kill or die for.


BOMBSHELL started 30/11/2009 downloads 6564

From the depths of the Baltic Sea,
a Royal Naval submarine intercepts a single covert transmission;
revealing the existence of a Russian spy as that of a prominent UK Banker.

James Bond embarks on a mission to determine the fate of the suspect.
But soon discovers he is not alone in his search.

As the World prepares for war, its fate hangs on the questions
posed by a Church of death and a man of vision

When Bond discovers the answers, he is propelled on a roller coaster ride
to stop a disaster of biblical proportions.

As time runs out, the odds against Bond grow longer,
until he is forced to take the ultimate gamble.


A SECRET TO THE GRAVE started 08/09/2010 downloads 7229

A Korean oil tanker, hijacked by Somali pirates forces the closure of the Gulf of Aden. With only seven years of financially viable oil reserves remaining; the beguiled country of Yemen is fast becoming a troubled land.

Until the ransom is paid; a World starved of oil will continue to slide toward the brink of financial collapse.

Against this backdrop, James Bond and Government official Elizabeth Loverseed arrive in the claustrophobic environment of insecurity and fear; where foreign governments fight for investors and influence.

Their mission: to investigate the man responsible for the increased terrorist activities. Khaled Wazir, an arms dealer, reported to have amassed an imposing cache of weapons.

But the mission is compromised when an elderly man presents himself at the British Embassy in Sana’a, claiming to know a secret he will share only with the Ambassador.

The man, it would seem, holds the key to a sinister and ambitious plot destined to open the very gates of hell.

Will the secret be shared? Or will it be a secret to the grave.

DECREE ABSOLUTE started 21/12/2011 downloads 8777

The death of an MI6 asset in Lisbon
draws James Bond into a web of intrigue.
Something is missing from Buckingham Palace.
Something which could destroy the Monarchy.
Whatever it is, 007 must ensure it never surfaces.
It and all involved must be eliminated.
Absolutely.

 

 Along with these six novels I have contributed to the Christmas Bond offerings  over three years, with

THE NIGHT BEFORE 2009

FIRE WITH FIRE 2010 Downloads 1135

RISQUE - 2011 downloads 763 My first attempt at a screenplay for the up and coming Film by Paul Cusack and Matthew Wood

I apologise for Risqué being difficult to read; and I have amended the style in 2013 to flow better for the next offering from Cusack studios

EVERYTHING OR NOTHING

 

Work on EON meant having to put my latest offering NEVER THE DEATH on hold, but IF you enjoy reading my stories take heart.

007 visiting Japan is scheduled for CBn in 2014



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Posted 25 September 2013 - 11:44 AM

Work on EON meant having to put my latest offering NEVER THE DEATH on hold, but IF you enjoy reading my stories take heart.

007 visiting Japan is scheduled for CBn in 2014

I always enjoy your work, Volante, so I'll be reading!



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Posted 30 September 2013 - 08:51 AM

 

Work on EON meant having to put my latest offering NEVER THE DEATH on hold, but IF you enjoy reading my stories take heart.

007 visiting Japan is scheduled for CBn in 2014

I always enjoy your work, Volante, so I'll be reading!

 

Thank you Major.

 

Today the penultimate chapter of EDGE OF TREASON goes in for submission.

As the story reaches it's climax, I can promise that the final scene features Bond exacting the revenge we all wanted to see

 

Best regards

Volante



#50 Dustin

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Posted 30 September 2013 - 10:10 AM

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 12:12 PM

Chapter Twenty in for submission.



#52 Dustin

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 04:02 PM

This is it: http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1269494



#53 Dustin

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Posted 19 October 2013 - 10:48 AM

This is the end...

http://debrief.comma...n/#entry1269828



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 12:59 PM

Thanks Dustin.

 

YES - The thrilling (well at least I thought so) chapter of EDGE OF TREASON has been published.

It's all there, If you are looking for a good 007 read the entire novel is now on line.

 

EDGE OF TREASON was my first novel, written during the making of Quantum of Solace.

The story is my take on the continuation from Daniel Craig's Casino Royale.

 

I believed that the story had been completely lost when CBn changed format and the story, like so many other good fan fictions got mashed.

A big thanks to Chris Stacy for providing the original story.

 

When I re-read it, I realized how sloppy the story was. I set about re-vamping the tale (especially to allow the tie in to DECREE ABSOLUTE)

 

I for one have had a great time re-writing the tale. It is a work that I feel now represents my work. 

 

I am pleased to include it in my back catalogue.

 

Novels by PAUL TAYLOR

 

EDGE OF TREASON

 

SILHOUETTES AND SHADOWS

 

TO KILL AND DIE FOR

 

BOMBSHELL

 

A SECRET TO THE GRAVE

 

DECREE ABSOLUTE



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Posted 22 October 2013 - 09:11 AM

Just a quick note to say that SIHOUETTES AND SHADOWS the follow on novel from EDGE OF TREASON can be found on:

Fan Fic Posting - Most Viewed page 1

 

Silhouettes and Shadows follows James Bond through Istanbul to Hong Kong on the trail of a banker who is hell bent upon releasing a virus over Asia in order to further his empire. 

Although he has only recently acquired the bank, he appears to be well connected to a world wide network of powerful men who remain on the fringe of notoriety. Powerful people pulling the strings of governments.

The Bond girl is in the form of Daisy Sinclair, daughter of the banks' former owner.