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Thirst for Revenge
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Chapter 1

Four weeks later
Fort Meade Maryland
NSA headquarters

Athena drove her Toyota Camry past the security checkpoint at Fort Meade

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Chapter 2
Chicago Illinois
11:30 PM
A black 1971 Ford mustang was speeding down the street towards the Red River bar. The driver was ten minutes away from the bar. The driver armed his sawed-off shotguns. He was a white male in his late twenties and was wearing a black trench coat and had a white dress shirt on with a black tie and he wore black jeans and had black cowboy boots.

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Red River Bar
Chicago Illinois

The bar was not as busy as a Saturday night but it was still business as usual for a Thursday night. There were only four people including the bar keep. The men drinking were black and white mixed with the crowd. Two men played pool while the other two were talking. The man that was running his big mouth was a man by the name Lenny Drakes. His nick name was pink because he looked a little like the singer

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Chapter 3
FBI Safe house/ Hanley Motel
Chicago Illinois


Joe was asleep on the sofa bed. He had traveled a long way from California to Maryland to Illinois. He was glad to get some rest. Joe awoke and looked around for agent Jones but Jones was nowhere to be found.

Then Joe heard the door knob turn and Jones walked in and saw Joe standing in his boxers.

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 16 February 2006 - 08:00 PM.

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Chapter 4
Darah dan doa shipping company
Chicago Illinois

Nick Caine drove his Blue Jaguar XKR towards the Darah Dan Doa shipping company that Caine owned. The Darah Dan Doa shipping company is a shipping company that operates out of Brazil and Illinois. It was formed in Brazil in 1996. Nick Caine formed the company in Brazil since he was a natural born Brazilin. He was born in 1969 in Rio Brazil and has lived there ever since. He owns several houses in Illinois, Brazil, Las Vegas and Havana Cuba. He mainly stays in Brazil and Illinois cause of Cuban gangsters. Caine is also a ruthless mobster who hates it when someone betrays him. Last time someone double-crossed Caine. He hunted him down and then beat the living out of him and then used a circular saw to cut the hands off and then he worked on the head with the saw. Caine then sent the body parts to the lost soul

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Chapter 5

Chicago Police Department
Chicago Illinois

Carlos Mendes had been a respectful Police detective on the Chicago Police force for a successful fifteen years. He was in his late thirties and was starting to show his age with a little speck of grey hair on the temple of his head. He is a great guy whom he has many friends on both sides of the law. He is part Mexican American and he knows Spanish very well. He has short black hair and brown eyes that women would just adore. He is six foot two and wears a size ten shoe. Detective Mendes is also good with handguns and is very skilled in Martial Arts. Carlos Mendes has a lovely wife and one child named Eva. His wife is Maria Jincita Mendes and they had their first and only child in December of 2000. The Mendes

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 10 March 2006 - 12:50 PM.

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Chapter 6
Jahara Dan Doa Shipping Co
11:15 PM
Chicago Illinois

Nick Caine was sitting patiently waiting for his lieutenant to arrive with Lenny Drakes. Nick reached into his desk drawer and pulled out a pack of Marlboro cigarettes. He then reached for a cigarette and put one in his mouth. Then he reached in the desk drawer and pulled out a Zippo lighter and he lit his cigarette. As Nick Caine smoked his cigarette he pondered why Lenny would betray him and why he would have skipped town. But Nick would now resolve the problem once and for all. Nick smoked and pondered why Lenny would do such a thing, but Nick was unaware that three black Ford Ecnoline vans were parking on the side of the warehouse. The vans housed Cuban Gangsters with fifteen per van. Their were forty five gangsters that are heavily armed with AK-47

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Chapter 7
FBI Headquarters
Chicago Illinois

Charles Higinson was in his office doing paperwork for a couple of assignments in the Illinois area. He was typing on the computer when his phone rang.

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Chapter 8
Las Vegas Nevada

Athena Sterling arrived in Vegas about the same time that Burner arrived in Illinois. She had been to Vegas about three years ago. Unfortunately it was business and no pleasure. She is staying at the Hilton Hotel on Bravada ST. She was walking down Witimer ST heading for the Dragon Casino. She is on a mission for the NSA to investigate the Casino of possible Lucky Dragon

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 14 March 2006 - 02:31 AM.

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Chapter 9
11:00 am
Havana Cuba

Lenny Drakes caught a private flight with Roberto Sanchez and his posse of Cuban gangsters to Havana Cuba. Lenny and the gang arrived in Cuba at 5:00 am and then he got a lot of rest. But all is busy as usual for Lenny as he is in hiding. The Cuban gangsters own a bunch of little safe houses in the Havana downtown area. Lenny was busy fiddling with an old computer and he was cursing at it and banging the computer till it ran the way he wanted it too.

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Chapter 10
Chicago Illinois

Carlos Mendes was driving alone along the freeway that ran along the river. He was heading for his home and was ready to kick off his shoes and take off the gun holster that was attached to his side and was ready to go to bed. It had been a long day for Carlos and he just pondered about his wife and child as he drove. He arrived at his home in forty minutes. He pulled in the driveway and he noticed another car parked outside in the front yard. It was a marked cop car that was parked in front. Carlos wondered who is at his house. He parked his car and got out and looked at the number on the marked Police unit and it read,

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 23 March 2006 - 01:22 PM.

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Chapter 11
Chicago Illinois

Carlos Mendes was driving back to the Police precinct in downtown Chicago. He wondered why his wife was having an affair.

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Chapter 12
Chicago Illinois
7:00 PM
Nick Caine sat down at his desk in his office at his flat. Caine thought,

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 23 March 2006 - 01:31 PM.

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Chapter 13
Chicago Illinois
12:00 PM
Joe Burner was driving down the freeway in a silver 1997 Ford Crown Victoria Police Interceptor issue. As he was driving he was listening to the radio station 101.6 Illinois

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Chapter 14
FBI headquarters Federal building
7:25PM

The cab that had Joe Burner in it pulled out in front of the federal building in downtown Chicago. Joe was bloody and bruised from the encounter he had with Jericho and Caine. He exited the cab and paid the cab ride fare which was twelve dollars and fifty cents. Joe gave the cabbie a twenty.

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 24 March 2006 - 10:03 PM.

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Chapter 15
Cook County Hospital
Chicago Illinois
1:00 PM
Joe Burner and David Jones went to Cook County Hospital to get Joe

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Chapter 16
Chicago Illinois
9:30 AM

Jericho and Nicholas Caine were leaving the Holiday Inn hotel on Jefferson Blvd and were heading for Chicago O

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 04 April 2006 - 01:34 AM.

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Chapter 17
Las Vegas International airport
4:30 PM

Nicholas Caine and Jericho arrived in Vegas and were just exiting the plane. They walked out of the gate terminal and were walking for the baggage claim area. Nick saw his bags and he reached for them. Jericho went to the car rental agency named

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 04 April 2006 - 08:44 PM.

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Chapter 18
Chicago Illinois
8:00 Am

Joe walked out of the new safe house which was very decent enough over that hotel room at the Hanley Motel. He walked to the curb of the sidewalk and he hailed down a cab. The cab stopped and Joe got in the back of the Yellow cab. The driver looked at Joe for the destination of the customers choice.

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 05 April 2006 - 12:13 PM.

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Chapter 19
Chicago Police Department
Chicago Illinois
10:00 am

Joe and David Jones drove to the Chicago Police department to meet with detective Franks of the Homicide division in the police department. They arrived at the Police main headquarters. David parked the Ford Crown Victoria right outside the front of the building. Joe and Dave got out of the white Ford car and they walked towards the front lobby doors of the main building of the CPD. They walked to the elevators and Joe pushed the call button. Joe looked at Jones and said,

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Chapter 20
FBI lab
Chicago Illinois

Burner and Jones were waiting for the results of the chubby man in the photograph they took from Mr. Vicks house. Joe received a phone call on his cell phone it was Rick Johnson. Joe walked outside the lab where the technicians worked on stuff like this. Joe put the phone to his ear and said,

Edited by Pierce James Bond, 01 May 2006 - 12:02 PM.

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Chapter 21
Chicago Illinois
Hanley Motel
FBI safe house

Joe Burner